Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
The given issue “Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers” is one of the basic responsibility of the Educational institutions. Students who have the inner power of certitude must do something in their life that’s why institutions must motivate the students for better life.
Firstly, Educations institutions; where students start to know the basic things for career even they didn’t fully understand which fields of study is best for them. At that time, they were confused and may choose the wrong fields of the study and their career will be ruined. For example, one students who had a passion with research and wants to research in astrophysics, he had no idea about how to do best research in a good way that he may have a success in his life. “As” that time institutions must actively encourage the student.
Additionally, Students, who encourages by education institutions, they never give-up what they choose for the successful life, from where a good, intelligent and relentless students are produced in the educational institutions. Who build up the society and the nation too.
At last, So the Educational institutions must give the right path for the students life, they must encourage the students to choose field by their hobby with what they are interested in. Which is the basic responsibility of Education institutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one student', 'a student', or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: one student; a student; students
...eir career will be ruined. For example, one students who had a passion with research and wan...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...os; that time institutions must actively encourage the student. Additionally, St...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho encourages by education institutions, they never give-up what they choose for ...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...utions must give the right path for the students life, they must encourage the students ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...y must encourage the students to choose field by their hobby with what they are inter...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hobby with what they are interested in. Which is the basic responsibility of Educatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40692640693 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20143260786 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4232374619 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44514384622 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188147287862 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162784293902 0.0758088955206 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297069251522 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132621488757 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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