Some people belive that self realisation comes with deep knowledge that one posesses . However , self knowledge comes with learning different things in different environments . If one wants to learn something he should get out of his comfort zone.More intense self-knowledge is the bigger rejection familiar environment has to face.Therefore, I totally agree with the speaker's assertion that the first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
First , it is the tendency of humans or it is inhibited in their blood that people agree with what has been taught or they agree with assertions that has been going on since ages . However unless and until we question these assertions there is no way of proving that they are correct . For example , the geocentric theory that was disproved by Galelio needed him to question the assertions made . Only after rejection the familiar he was able to come up with heliocentric theory which stated that sun is the center of the universe . Had he not rejected the ongoing theory we would still be learning that every planet revolves around the earth .
Second , rejecting things that are stated can help us expand our knowledge base . Perhaps , rejecting the things that are taught can teach us if we are wrong . For example , teachers in schools and colleges encourage students to question what they donot understand or if they find things hard to believe . After students questioning these facts , teachers can give examples or answer their questions in depth that would enhance a students knowledge . Also this can help students to think in a way that they didnt think beforehand thus helping the students to develop .
The familiarity of things,thoughts, beliefs makes us more comfortable and prohibiting people to discover new aspects within themselves.One cannot grow and succeed unless he tries to get out from his comfort level and fight against the "obvious" elements of his surroundings.There is basic difference between successful people and ordinary people.People who reject the familiar customs and traditions of the world, in order to find something more valuable, are always the people who bring change in our society.For instance, Mother Teresa, who decided to devote her entire life for children and poor people, became nun at age of 18.During that time , it was not common thing for a girl to become a nun at such a young age.But she decided and brought a huge change in mentality of our society.
However, it is also true that people also learn from the environment which is familiar to them but the area of learning is very limited.Therefore, in order to learn more one has to contradict the familiar beliefs and thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14578587699 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97013741163 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521640091116 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.831525253 60.3974514979 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.6 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2666666667 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280193134962 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938811978748 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124581015678 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153501984869 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15653124784 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.