The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Pre-concieved notions about any situation always cause bias in assessing the problem.I partially agree that it is important to unlearn what we already know to learn new things.This keeps our mind open to new perspectives. Although,I would concede that rejecting familiar knowledge altogether can prove fallacious,the following paragraphs will shed a light on both the advantages and disadvantages of this position.
On the one hand, rejecting what we already know helps us to understand the other perspectives.When we start to learn oursleves we need to start with a fresh slate.It may happen so that the kowledge we have is biased and can hamper our journey of learning.Once this journey is completed ,then we can make a informed descision whether to pick a side or accept the whole theory.For instance,if a interviewer knows the candidate on a beforehand,their prior knowledge of the candidate may hamper the authenticity of the interview.The interviewer may make a biased descision which is completely unfair.Hence ,they need to keep their mind clear of any prior information about the interviwee and given them a fair chance.
On the flip side,this familiar knowledge can prove useful in making predictive decisions in medical as well as business feild. For a doctor to make a diagnosis,or for that matter prognosis prior knowledge of the patients history is crucial.They have to know the complete picture before administering any medical care. Similarly in the feild of business, previous information about companies work culture, and financial decisions can help predict future growth of the firm and help take better steps to improve the same.
Hence,I partially agree with the given prompt while presenting both the pros and cons of rejection of known knowledge.It is completely situational and a person must decide it according to the situtation at hand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, similarly, so, then, well, while, for instance, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34576271186 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1903149905 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.177686318 60.3974514979 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.285714286 118.986275619 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1428571429 23.4991977007 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 5.21951772744 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849188674978 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420739633699 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0131981400517 0.0758088955206 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524390229588 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00986611570145 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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