Museums should display art of their own country, or they should display art from all over the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (May 2021) Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Museums hold a great importance in revealing history of the world. There are two schools of thoughts when it comes to decide whether national or international art should be presented there.I agree with the opinion that we should have a global approach when it comes to the content of the museums.
A museum is where knowledge is being imparted with the help of visuals. Numerous artifacts are kept on display. When we include art pieces of artists from all over the world it attracts a huge number of art enthusiasts. They get to see and indulge in experiences that they normally wouldn’t get otherwise in case of displaying only local or national art, the reason being that these artifacts from all over the world help the citizens to understand varied art forms apart from ones in their own country. These international artworks would also help in acquainting people with different cultures of the world and also compare it to their artworks, all at in the same place. Moreover, another reason is that this will benefit by increasing the footfall of tourists and citizens alike to the museum and get more funds for improvisations in the future.
On the other hand, if the museum is restricted only to the arts of their own country it will be difficult for it to sustain. Particularly because the citizens living there will already be aware of the art forms in their country. Moreover, these will interest them for very less time too. This will limit the footfall only to the tourists which in turn would limit the income made by the visitors.
Hence , some people would still prefer having museums display the national treasure as opposed to displaying artifacts from all over the world to attract is favored by me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82432432432 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55496770409 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9374984912 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316653373518 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102707652406 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080456418525 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174237614461 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725029874179 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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