There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed.Discuss both sides.
In recent times, the rate of serious crimes has increased exorbitantly. When it comes to deciding an appropriate course of action, there seem to be two schools of thought. Some think that the best way to curb the serious crimes is the death penalty whereas some think that alternative measures need to be considered.
Many people believe that, awarding a death penalty to person for a heinous crime is the best way to teach them a lesson. As gruesome as it sounds, such criminal offenders need to face the consequences of their wrongdoings. Punishing them in such a way would put a complete stop to their criminal mentality, and at the same time send a clear threat to people with similar mentality. Moreover, this ensures rightful justice to the victim of the crime and/or their family. For instance, China straightaway executes perpetrators of rape or murder consequently their rate of crime is low
On the other hand, some people think that there is another course of action to control the rise of critical crimes. Alternative measures like a life sentence for major crimes could also prove useful. A life sentence, ensures that the offender stays locked up for the rest of their life, wherein they will be kept under the watchful eyes of the authorities. However, in some cases, the crime could be an action taken in self-defense, a petty shoplifting felony, or a wrongful conviction. Considering this scenario, the punishment could be less severe such as doing community service, levying an appropriate fine, or checking oneself into a rehabilitation center. In this way, such offenders can get a second chance to improve themselves.
In conclusion, committing a serious crime can result either in a death sentence or other measures like a life sentence, community service, or a fine depending upon the severity of the crime. The punishment should be awarded only after a complete investigation to ensure that justice is served.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84320968045 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9313550504 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332872843108 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106162144577 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939514790912 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213165805977 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102442708107 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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