There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed.Discuss both sides.
In recent times, the rate of serious crimes has increased exorbitantly. When it comes to deciding an appropriate course of action, there seem to be two schools of thought. Some think that the best way to curb serious crimes is the death penalty whereas some think that alternative measures need to be considered.
Many people believe that awarding the death penalty to a person for a heinous crime is the best way to teach them a lesson. As gruesome as it sounds, such criminal offenders need to face the consequences of their wrongdoings. Punishing them in such a way would put a complete stop to their criminal mentality, and at the same time send a clear threat to the masses with a similar mentality. Moreover, this ensures rightful justice to the victim of the crime and/or their family.
On the other hand, some people think that there is another course of action to control the rise of critical crimes. Alternative measures like a life sentence and confinement in single cells could also prove useful. A life sentence ensures that the offender stays locked up for the rest of their life, wherein they will be kept under the watchful eyes of the authorities. Moreover, if the offender is dangerous to other prisoners they can be confined to a single small cell, in complete isolation.
In conclusion, committing a serious crime can result either in a death sentence or other measures like a life sentence or isolation depending upon the severity of the crime. The punishment should be awarded only after a complete investigation to ensure that justice is served.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87313432836 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68871183053 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7750938373 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336525659377 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110159587325 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10148589301 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201745713808 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108905842665 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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