Following the September 11th attack, where the Al-Queda acquired bombmaking and terrorist knowledge over the internet, many lawmakers have proposed that an international body regulate the internet so that sites which provide information to terrorists could be eliminated.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
September 11th, was the most remorseful and terrified day of the year, when Al-Queda attacked on
world trade park through a plan satiated with explosive, killing thousands of people, and spreading
terror in America. Later, it was know that Al-Queda acquired bomb making and terrorist knowledge
over the internet. Following he September 11th attack, many lawmakers proposed that there should
be an international body regulate, that expurgate the internet, so that sites which provide information
to terrorists could be eliminated.
Regulating the internet will at least make sure that, such iniquity information is not easily available to
any one. Not eradicate but at least will minimise the risk. Al-Queda attack on the world trade park
was through the bomb which do not require any training and was made in the home through simple
procedure by seeing the instructions on the sites. There are various sites which provide such kind of
delicate information to the people. These kind of information is so accessible to public that it created
more danger. It will be wise to regulate such site by an international body.
With the proposer of such of kind of regulation on such equanimity sites, it will not only make
extricate the terrorist groups but also make sure that such kind of information is not used by any
teenager or any person. This is a important step to ensure that any teenager or any person will not
be accessible to such informations.
Although, internet is so vast that regulating all such sites, which provide such information regarding
bomb making or any other type will require great contribution. Despite of all measures one cannot
be sure of that all the sites have been regulated. When it comes to dark net it hardly impossible to
regulate all such content. Dark net is so wide and contains so many such kind of informational sites.
So, just regulating the internet by an international body alone cannot alone eradicate the sites which
provide informations to terrorists.
In sum, imposing a regulation on the internet by an international body will surely help, but it will not
gaurante to completely remove all such sites which provide information to the terrorists groups, but
is will surely make such kind of information not easily available to public. It is always better to take a
measure than doing nothing on it.
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...y of the year, when Al-Queda attacked on world trade park through a plan satiated...
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...lling thousands of people, and spreading terror in America. Later, it was know th...
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...ding terror in America. Later, it was know that Al-Queda acquired bomb making and ...
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...ired bomb making and terrorist knowledge over the internet. Following he Septembe...
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...errorist knowledge over the internet. Following he September 11th attack, many lawmakers proposed th...
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...any lawmakers proposed that there should be an international body regulate, that ...
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... so that sites which provide information to terrorists could be eliminated. Re...
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...y information is not easily available to any one. Not eradicate but at least will...
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...nformation is not easily available to any one. Not eradicate but at least will minimi...
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... Al-Queda attack on the world trade park was through the bomb which do not requir...
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... and was made in the home through simple procedure by seeing the instructions on ...
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...various sites which provide such kind of delicate information to the people. Thes...
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...f delicate information to the people. These kind of information is so accessible to publ...
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... so accessible to public that it created more danger. It will be wise to regulate...
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... equanimity sites, it will not only make extricate the terrorist groups but also ...
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...h kind of information is not used by any teenager or any person. This is a import...
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...y any teenager or any person. This is a important step to ensure that any teena...
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...that any teenager or any person will not be accessible to such informations. A...
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...which provide such information regarding bomb making or any other type will requi...
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...tion. Despite of all measures one cannot be sure of that all the sites have been ...
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...that all the sites have been regulated. When it comes to dark net it hardly impossib...
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...omes to dark net it hardly impossible to regulate all such content. Dark net is s...
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...e cannot alone eradicate the sites which provide informations to terrorists. I...
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...l body will surely help, but it will not gaurante to completely remove all such s...
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...nformation to the terrorists groups, but is will surely make such kind of informa...
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...to public. It is always better to take a measure than doing nothing on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14102564103 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80977092007 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4985367926 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.388888889 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.97078651685 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375161497062 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128797807744 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122088867508 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113316350028 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100832642346 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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