People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Whenever there is an situation, where we have to make a sound decision, we always have come across an ambivalent situation, where our heat and mind tries to supersede one's decision. And finally, most of the time, mind concede. The Reason is not because hearts decision is not logically, but the reason being, we are human beings and we put are emotions before logic.
As suggested in a psychological study, 95% of people take decision based on emotions and after making that decision, they were found calm, composed and relaxed, no matter how terrible there decision was, rather than those 5% of people. And after making such poor decision, they tries to justify their decision with logic, not just to convince people that, they have made right decision, but to convince them-self. And it's completely fine because we are human beings and we have emotions.
Additionally, We really can't say whether a decision is poor or sound. It depends on an individual, if he regrets taking that decision rest of his life then, yes it's a poor decision, but if he is happy then we really can't say he had made a poor decision or he is an poor decision maker.
In conclusion, it's okay to make decision based on emotion and it's also completely fine to justify your decision with logic but be make sure if you know you had make a terrible decision, just don't repeat it again and again. This will just impede you sound decision making ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are human beings and we have emotions. Additionally, We really cant say whether...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, then, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68525896414 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4642585653 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525896414343 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8624724378 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297635905805 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124290817473 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922647259743 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190477473037 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892661374676 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.