Knowledge earned in any form plays an indivisible part of an individual life and formal education do contribute in this. But as per the author's perspective, formal education adds boundation to our thoughts which is quite reasonable.
Right from our childhood, we have been taught that to learn more in order to earn more. While implementing this lesson, we tend connect learning directly with formal education which is true but partially. Formal education may give us the seeds of knowledge, but the individuals creativity helps to nourish the tree of knowledge. An individuals creativity assists him to outshine from the mob. For example, Google contains plethora of ignited minds, but the contribution of Sundar Pichai in its immensely successful products like "Google Chrome","Google Drive" , etc. helped to draw out the decision for the choice of its CEO.
However there are exceptional cases that prove insignificance of formal education. The best example for this could be of Mark Zuckerbuck, founder of Facebook. He was a college dropout and according to the society, college dropout is the looser for life. But he proved this mindset wrong and the rest is history. There are many such example that demonstrate that knowledge can be acquired without formal education.
The reason for all this is that formal education has a standardized format which, in one way or other, add restrictions to our thought process and can foment our path of success. That is why, these ignited minds assist us to know the lament truth of the education system. Though, aforementioned can still be utilized (as done by Sundar Pichai) to get the best out of it.For example, in drawing class , we learned how to hold the brush, the one who sketches his creativity outshines into a great painter.
In conclusion, formal education is just one of the way to gain knowledge. Paradoxically, one cannot fully rely on it to reach the apex of success. An individual needs to work on his creativity to the wisdom he is looking for. Doesn't matter if the foundation of creativity is from education system or not, it's the individuals mind that can change his life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...n do contribute in this. But as per the authors perspective, formal education adds boun...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...give us the seeds of knowledge, but the individuals creativity helps to nourish the tree of...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ps to nourish the tree of knowledge. An individuals creativity assists him to outshine from...
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...le Chrome','Google Drive' , etc. helped to draw out the decision fo...
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Suggestion: However,
...decision for the choice of its CEO. However there are exceptional cases that prove ...
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...tivity to the wisdom he is looking for. Doesnt matter if the foundation of creativity ...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...tivity is from education system or not, its the individuals mind that can change hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10393258427 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04664613674 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2000829645 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.85 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136208954084 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381124477715 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404941310825 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766599224083 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405545084085 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.