Every thing in the universe have certain goal to achieve. Right from the sun to an ant, everything has a purpose of its existence. This goals can be short-term or long-term. Like, the sun's goal is to provide light on the earth daily, while an ant worked hard to collect the food in the summer so that it will not need to work in the winter for its survival. To achieve our goal, we came across many hurdles and any means taken to attain that goal are always justifiable. You will always been judged by your achievements and not by the path or difficulties that you face to get your achievement.
Different people can have the same goal, but their path can be different. History witness that freedom fighters chosen their own way to achieve the same goal i.e. "Independence". For example, Mahatma Gandhi and Martin Luther King Jr. choose the path of non-violence to get freedom. While other freedom fighters like Chandra Shekhar Azad thought that "Tit for Tat" could be the best way to achieve their goal. Each means is justifiable. You just have to focus on it.
The means chosen by individual is based on different things like the circumstances, background(like Social, Economical), luck, strengths and weakness.For example, millions of students are preparing for GRE every year. To acquire a better score, they set their path to their accomplishment. Like some might created time table to study the different topic, while some might focusing on only the topics that they are good at. I am personally focusing on my weak point i.e. Analytical Writing. So in this way different path can lead to same goal.
The path to success is never easy. You may need to face sacrifice to reach your goal. Everyone do and this is the rule of life, that if you want to gain something then you have loose. Indian cricketer M. S. Dhoni, for example, was playing the World Cup match when his wife gave birth to his child. This is because he has the goal that "Nation comes First" in his mind and accordingly gave helped India to won the World Cup.
Thus if the goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are always justifiable.
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- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones."In order to relieve Briggsville’s notorious traffic congestion, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi-million dollar subway system. The subway will run through the 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73936170213 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75480053445 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5366413708 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207995028796 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643198413805 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773836399584 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145591312266 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839599464168 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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