I adhere to the statement that welfare of nation's people best indicates nation's greatness than emphasizing achievements
of individual occupants.To support the above statement reasons include nations worldwide competency,ascending living
standard of people and infrastructure growth.General welfare is inclusive financial, cultural, health, jobs, education and infrastructure for any country to be called a great nation,requires these basic necessities.
Firstly,Financial situation, any great country to compete in the world requires solid financial layout.GDP is the way
to measure any country's growing potential.If govt. of respective country is careful enough to manage jobs for people and
encourage them to start up can not only ascend nation financially but as well make nation job sufficient.It is far better than
praising an individual for his achievements.
Secondly,Infrastructure, a highly regarded term that amplifies nation's greatness.Infrastructure is directly related
to people's welfare as infrastructure grows jobs are invented to maintain them,build them.Thus unemployment reduces
which is a positive sign for any country's growth.Infrastructure ascends tourism therefore indirectly enhancing
nation financially.Whereas a well known figure could not have made infrastructure and nation great by his alone
achievements.
Thirdly,Living standard,As nation will grow financially, living standard of people will enhance.A job sufficient country
with good GDP and Growing infrastructure will provide people better standard of living.It includes education,healthcare
facilities and a secure job.Therefore, to make a nation great it is mandatory to know how people are living and how to
ease there living and rise their standard of living.
Moreover,achievements of individual can extol nation worldwide.Making it a more respectable nation in the world.Therefore,a nation should praise individuals for their efforts and remarkable achievements so that they keep on doing good for their societies and welfare of others.
In conclusion,to make a nation great or call it one,one cannot rely only on achievements of individuals.It requires
sweat and hard work of people of nation as well as govt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2987012987 5.05705443957 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.93325325598 2.79657885939 176% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.283121376 60.3974514979 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 242.5 118.986275619 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.5 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.21951772744 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24692381649 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125118446556 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543287672532 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800471037895 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656432853916 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 14.1392134831 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 48.8420337079 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 12.1743820225 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.85 12.1639044944 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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