Government officials
In the era of democracy, the government officials, mostly elected by the people, face a dilemma when it comes to taking decisions. While it is true that democracy means "by the people and for the people", which implies implicitly that all the decisions should be based on the wills of people the officials severe. But serving them creates a series of other problems which can put their job at stake, and in the long run lose faith amongst the very people they sought to serve. Therefore, government officials should base their decisions on their own judgement rather than stooping down and pleasing the public.
Firstly, everyone can agree that job of an government is difficult. The requirement to choose between difficult options and in the process, gaining hostility from the people, is the reason that makes the job so difficult. Saying that the officials should take decisions based on their own judgement, does not automatically imply that they should not pay heed to the demands of people. Instead, they should listen to everyone but the final decisions should be inaccordance to their own instinct.
Secondly, sometimes public is not educated enough and therby cannot fathom the bigger picture involving politics and economics. Therfore, it is true that most of the time, majority is unware of what it wants and how it can be achieved. Hence, it is the job of the elected govenment officials to discern the needs of the citizens and find ways to fulfill the demands. Public looks at the results more closely then the paths which lead to them. Hence, if the officials focus on their judments and reach the desied goals, the citizens will forget about the methods and praise the official for the outcome.
Furthermore, as it know that it is impossible the demands of everyone, therefore a official trying to accomodate each and every wish is deemed to fail. Even more worse, the official can be seen as fickle minded and detoriate his/her chances to get elected in the next election. Public would see a wavering person as weak and unfit to make decisions, rather than lording. Hence, the government officials should base their decision on their own intuition rather.
To sum up, listening to everyone makes it harder to satify everyone, and in the process of making someone happy the officials are prone to make other dissattisfied. Therefore, officials should consider everyones demands but the final decision should be based on their own intuition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...Firstly, everyone can agree that job of an government is difficult. The requiremen...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ible the demands of everyone, therefore a official trying to accomodate each and ...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
... and every wish is deemed to fail. Even more worse, the official can be seen as fickle min...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03163017032 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60496349274 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513381995134 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5450465571 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.842105263 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278485789776 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893587840173 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855474931814 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168856643837 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553148204222 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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