Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
An effective leader is the one who stands firmly on their principles and objectives.
Firstly, it is natural for humans to respect those who stand firm in thier objectives and decisions; it is a sign of reliability. People can relate to ones with a steady belief. A person with wavering principles shows signs of uncertinity and lack of vision, hence is not suitable to be a leader. Therefore, in order to be an effective leader, whether it be in the field of politics, one has to remain consistently commited to his beliefs and objectives, even if it means dissenting a popular opinion.
Secondly, as a saying goes - "hundred people will ask for hundred different things". This shows the variation of desires in humans, therby it is implausable to please everyone. A leader - should be seen as a final authority in deciding the vision and also what is the right path to reach that goal. For instance, Steve Jobs is considered a good leader. His vision was firm and he was not afraid to say "no". He rightfully said - "People do not know what they want, unless utill we show them what they desire". And as we know today, Apple is the biggest tech companies in this world and this is beacuse of the Steve jobs did not abandon his principles for the sake of compromise. This shows that people might diagree with you first, but with the realse of results, opinions of people will change.
On the contrary, it is true that initially public will see you as a good leader when you yeild to their opinion, but, with time the people will see you as a survile politician. The most difficult part of being a leader is the ability to dissent from the popular opinion and finding the right vision and setting corerct objects to reach the goal. People follow those who have a clear vision and not the ones with fickle mind.
To sum up, the most essential quality of a leader is to remain consistently commited to a particular belief, on the other hand if one tries to yeild to the public opinion, he would risk coming off as a brown noser and an unsuitable leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, it is true, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69719453602 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514905149051 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3837979125 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297024104172 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893958321236 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752081730436 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181731783897 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515283197579 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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