Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
While choosing between military and art, government should focus its budget on military.
Firstly, while it is true that we are not in war and we do not see any countries engaging in it in the near future, it cannot be said that there will be no war in the future. Furthermore, it is not always the case that war heralds its coming. War is based around the idea of surprise, therefore preparation is the key. Focusing the investments on the army, fortifies the citizens against any potential threat in the future.
Additionally, many of us readily assume that the term "war" automatically means that it is a dispute between two or more countries. But, this is not always the case. Many a times, groups like terrorist organisations, aim at disrupting the peace in a country. Therefore, it requires country to have strong defense against such threats, which is the job of military, fighting war against terrorism. Hence, investments in military are more important than in the field of arts.
Furthermore, art is a field unlike military which does not require training. Art is the extension of artists mind via mediums like painting, dance, poetry etc, this can only be polished to a certain extant via training. As we can see, art has no limit, music is art, film can be considered art, comedy is art, it an inexaustive list. Art emcompasses so many varieties that it becomes difficult to cater to each and every one of it form.
Moreover, the preservation and growth of art necessiates the need for military. It is absurd that the citizens could focus on creating art at times of constant threat. Soldiers ensure that they eradicate any potential of threat, the environment of peace is substantial for art. For example, all the famous artists, let be it Mozart in music, Charlie Chaplon in threatre
In conclusion, while given the option of funding either military or art, goverment should choose military. In essence military play a substantial role is ensuring that peace prevails in a country and inevetantly it allows for art to prosper, by creating suitable environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94900849858 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86025284072 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2489905862 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251601083195 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673339399611 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067779356009 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131634313812 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764470346749 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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