Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
With plethora of books and articles dicussing the hidden secrets of becoming a great leader, the have one thing is common - that is to be successful one must learn how to be persuasive. The skill of persuasion is a subset of various skills that come under cooperation. Therefore, cooperation is the most valuable skills a leader must pocess.
Firstly, children learn to be competetive from a very young age, it is not a skill which needs to be taught. For example, often kids will play games which have competition in their very core - like coming first in a race, high score in a video game and even something silly as drinking soda the fastest. This being said, coorperation or teamwork is a skill which is not inherent, it builds and polishes via experience. Therefore, in order to be successful leaders one most invest time to learn teamwork, because competetion is something which we already have in our DNA.
Secondly, out of competitiveness and cooperation, the latter is a more important skill. Cooperation helps in building support for your vision, without support or followers there is nothing to lead. Persuasion, empathy, motivation etc are all subset of cooperation, these skills help to coherce people together. On the otherhand, competition creates hostility and differnce, which seperates humans.
On the contrary, some might argue that one might loose thier edge if you aren't competitive. While this is some what true but still out of competetion and cooperation. the former will always hold a second place in the list of most important leadership skills.
For example, Gandhi did not compete with other leader like S.C Bose, J Nehru, but he focused on creating unity among people by coorporating with other leaders. So as we know today, this lead to unification of Indians, which inturn lead to freedom. Had Gandhi decided to compete with other leaders, there would have been a chaous and it might be possible that India would be still under the rule of Britishers.
To sum up, while competition and cooperation are both important skills for a successful leader, cooperation is more important than the other. It is something which had to be learned, unlike competitiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, even so, for example, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0521978022 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87193823116 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4062696867 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7894736842 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310093218734 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824239640163 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724641791608 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149516282437 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728694290981 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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