Government Officials Should Rely on Their Own Judgement Rather Than Unquestioningly Carry Out The Will of The People They Serve GRE Issue Essay | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Government Officials Should Rely on Their Own Judgement Rather Than Unquestioningly Carry Out The Will of The People They Serve GRE Issue Essay

Every government has a plethora of responsabilities for their people. Indeed, it is the government that it is in charge, this means that the government takes all the decisions that people needs to follow in order to maintain a straight line in the lives of their citizens. The government is compound by a lot of different kind of people such as presidents, deputees, minister. Among any government, there is the chief, the head of all this group, called government, by being the head that we see the most, he will take all the responsabilities after annoncing any kind of action that the government has made an accord. Thus, that chief is responsible to make all the governement officials that the citizens will appreciate or not. All those officials are the results of decisions made in upstream with the people that compound the government. Unfortunatly, all decisions are not appreciate by every citizens. Therefore, the government should also take the will of the people they serve and not only their own judgment.

Firstly, before taking any decisions, the government will brainstorm a lot between their minister or president but minor percent of those people will take the will of the citizens. Indeed, it is important to take note of what people want and not to just follow their own judgement. For example, in France, they discuss for the new law of retirement. The age of retirement has increased thus it will passe from 62 years old to 64 years old. Many manifestations are made in order to ban this law because pople are not ready to work until 64 years old mostly if they are working in a physicial work. Thus, if the governement wants those manifestatiosn to stop, they need to listen to the will of the citizens and find an arrangement.

Secondly, if government don't stop to rely on their own judgment for their officials, peopel will start a refferundum. Indeed, those decisions that take the government on their own judgment will have for consequences that peole will stop listening to them because if people are not taking seriously, why should people take seriously those decisions.

The government officials can rely also on their own judgment. Indeed, the government can take all the divergent meanign of the citizens thus it is easier to make this decision on its own but it should be better for the well-being of the country that governement listen more about what people wants.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...people take seriously those decisions. The government officials can rely also o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89731051345 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82770631921 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430317848411 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1746995069 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.277777778 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295767131404 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118191529748 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866507362861 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207122899909 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201450583661 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this: