Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Managing and ruling a country has never been easy and debate on how it should be done has gone hand in hand with it from the very beginning. Due to the complexity that the topic presents there are various situations that either side might be the better option. There are certain questions that are helpful in deciding which path to take. What makes the government officials suitable for making different decisions? How does people opinion play into this process? And If compromise is necessary to what extent should it be allowed? The answer to these questions can act as a lantern to light the way.
Decision making for the affairs of a country has never been an easy thing to do. There are a myriad of aspects that should be considered since practically every choice can have ripple effects on another part of people’s lives. Official are the elected that were chosen by the people themselves in order to decide what to do in certain situations. The questions is what is the area that a decision needs to be made? What bases are needed for a good choice? Is it experience or expertise? As an instance, during the times of war, the tension is high and the people heavily rely on their leaders to carry the people at hard times. In this situation the people are frustrated and most likely cannot make logical decisions on what to do. So it is not advantageous to include the emotional state of people into the decision making process. In addition, at times of economical crisis, most people do not have the experties that is needed to lead a nation out of it. Here again, the beliefe of people can hinder a correct choice. Thus, it can be concluded that during hard times when people do not possess the knowledge or objectivity that is needed to prosper, it is best for government officials to take the responsibility and lead the country in what path they seem fit.
Another moment aspect is the people themselves. What are the rights that they possess? Every person has the right to be provided safety and well being by the government. However, does this mean that the people’s opinion should always be considered? How seriously can they effect and be helpful in making a choice? Regarding the job market, if a certain group of people are suffering because they do not have a job, their opinions most likely are not very constructive in solving the problem because they are not objective about it. It is possible that an official can make a better judgment on how to solve a problem. Maybe the people insist on starting a new factory in town to help the people to find jobs, but if that happens the pollution will make everything worse on the entire town. In this case it is best no to listen to the voice of people on the matter.
On more moment perspective is regarding a compromise when one is needed. When and why should the government give into the people? through out history we have seen that most successful people have been in making a difference is in social apsects. The feminism movement was they needs of the people that eventually lead the officials to listen to them and change the law. In such cases, when the effect of the choice can have weight on every day life of people the governments are easier to persuade. In contrast though, when it comes to international decisions most official do not listen to the people because they do not posses the experties or the experience needed to make such convoluted decisions.
Managing a country is one of the most difficult jobs in the entire world. When and why the official should pay attention to the people’s opinion varies with the choice and the circumstances. But if one studies the history and categorizes different situations in the same manner as stated in this text one might be able to answer when and why different path might be advantageous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...r been an easy thing to do. There are a myriad of aspects that should be considered si...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...r part of people's lives. Official are the elected that were chosen by the peo...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...do in certain situations. The questions is what is the area that a decision needs ...
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Line 3, column 865, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...aking process. In addition, at times of economical crisis, most people do not have the exp...
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Line 5, column 812, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...rse on the entire town. In this case it is best no to listen to the voice of people on ...
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Line 5, column 820, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...he entire town. In this case it is best no to listen to the voice of people on the...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...ld the government give into the people? through out history we have seen that most succ...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ld the government give into the people? through out history we have seen that most successf...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...apsects. The feminism movement was they needs of the people that eventually lead the ...
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Line 7, column 503, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... governments are easier to persuade. In contrast though, when it comes to international ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3170.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 677.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68242245199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10090420048 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.584126483 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415066469719 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1001.7 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1265634779 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6756756757 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2972972973 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151540294788 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409494850819 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324829717851 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916645279667 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235029088535 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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