Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Government is there to help people and solve the big and small problem is society to make is more healthy to live life in better vivaciously
But if Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than the people they Surve then it will make it difficult to live by so many problems we ( as people ) faced in day to day life where govt. role is crucial , due to this - I strongly Disagree with the statement for below reasons

First , this may sound like dictatorship and also like autocracy - Think of a world were you have the power and you are using it for your own fantasy , your fantasy or dream can be a big disaster for others for example : let say you want to build a hotel in cost of misery people who have the only income source of there farming land but some govt official got some Bribe to make it most misery situation in your life that tend to moribund and they got there dream full fill to make a hotel in a cost of that poor people farming land,Power is amazing factor in human life but if power is in the hand of bad people then it will destroy the concept of humanity and if that happen - I have to say this that will cause a masses of suicide due to Money and other problems associated with that.
The good example in India is Masses of Farmer did suicide in Maharashtra in 2018 due to money and other problems - sources BBC news
Second , Govt is there to help us because 21st century is more focus on Democracy than autonomy - It is the duty of Govt to make a smooth decision to please people to make there life great instead of dealing with some bad rules and regulation to make there life misery for instance - Dr. Babasaheb Ambedkar the father of Indian Constitution made many rules and policy to make everyonce life euphoria because of there decision some SC community people are still taking many advantages and making there life more happier than ever , My concern here is if govt official or govt is making some rule that only making profit to them then it will be a disaster to the human being living in that country or city but in contrast if the same govt making some rules that making peoples life great to live then a country will stand out in world and become the most valuable country or city in world.
Writer has to look on both the side of the coin if govt making some rules then it should be in the favour of all not for the only govt or its So called officials - hence the statement “ Government official Should rely on their own judgment “ is fully one direction statement that will make a govt. more autocracy then Democracy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37083333333 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19188794896 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441666666667 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 96.0 23.0359550562 417% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 373.496238268 60.3974514979 618% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 419.6 118.986275619 353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 96.0 23.4991977007 409% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 5.21951772744 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171720432923 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106306465362 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708940994904 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101447246227 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792312216292 0.0667264976115 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.2 14.1392134831 334% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.04 48.8420337079 -19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 12.1743820225 315% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.4 11.2143820225 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast

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