Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
This will allow teacher to solve there doubt more quickly and the class will be more researchbased, students will get the insightfull experience for each session on the educators but on the other hand what is the ( bharosa. ) of students that they will learn it from the correct source or even if theu learn it from that then what is the surety that they get the exact concept of the topic this statement is nebulous in various factor as below.
First, for while just imagine a girl who is recently visited america and get admitted to the one of the top university and started there curricullam from day one as she enter the school after the admission- now after she going back to home she may have to clean her room travel to the nearest food stall or market for dinner arrangement and somuch other stuff to do and also don’t forget the assignment of the school.In this above example, we can get the idea of how hectic life student live with vivacious smile but still have to do everything in the one full day being in college and after the college-from this another task of learning from home the topic which educator is willing to take on next day then the students life will miserly go unwell and a filling of woe come to everyonce mind if they feel the same thing.
Second, Some topic can’t be understood at home therotically and they need some extra adept persons guidance for instance let consider Digital Marketing one of the great serched term in search engine in Pandemic (COVID - 2019), because of the lockdown and quorantine people are not going out for anyreason but business man having so much trouble to sell there product online they very few survive in pandemic due to digital marketing - which is practical based phenominon and have to learn learn under erudite person guidance, Just imagine what happen when a student learn the topic but not the correct way then teacher/educators task will be double and that is the undoubtly the quirky situation for him/her.
Third, writer is more visionary and we have to encourage such vision where writer is saying that think of a situation where student already gone through the basic of the topic and now educator is just walking them through the expert touch of the concept, for example - C Language is the programming language of computer by which Kernal is designed in the System Software if students of engineering search littel bit about the C Language from book ( Like “Let us C” by Kanetkar ) then the erudite educator will move there doubt and curiousity to the next level - but here all student must do the same task else few student missed it and for those educator have to teach again
Conclusion, Writer word are extraordinary and surely will help the educator and the education system to build a expert from this task who then will make the world more buetiful than it is now - but we should not dominate the other fact that will affect student and if writer take a few moment to understand and give solution to that then this will be the best thing forever.
Comments
Please ignore (bharosa) - i…
Please ignore (bharosa) - i wanted to write "rely"
but as I am preparing for actual test I completed this write up in exact 30 min and I just missed that word and I have learn to look every word for now and I will never repeat it specially on my test date (4th Oct 2021)
Hoping foe the best - and also good luck for your GRE too
Regards
Shishant Mahato
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: enters
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...n’t forget the assignment of the school.In this above example, we can get the idea...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...is willing to take on next day then the students life will miserly go unwell and a filli...
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...otically and they need some extra adept persons guidance for instance let consider Digi...
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...ittel bit about the C Language from book Like “Let us C” by Kanetkar then the er...
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...e from book Like “Let us C” by Kanetkar then the erudite educator will move ther...
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Message: Did you mean 'this educator' or 'those educators'?
Suggestion: this educator; those educators
...task else few student missed it and for those educator have to teach again Conclusion, Writer...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun moment seems to be countable; consider using: 'few moments'.
Suggestion: few moments
...ill affect student and if writer take a few moment to understand and give solution to that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, then, third, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2497.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65858208955 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38469241996 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505597014925 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 107.0 23.0359550562 464% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 333.249456114 60.3974514979 552% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 499.4 118.986275619 420% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 107.2 23.4991977007 456% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 5.21951772744 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122762298182 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635245586012 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389087293715 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724959755453 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295683145576 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.1 14.1392134831 383% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -28.67 48.8420337079 -59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.8 12.1743820225 360% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.01 8.38706741573 143% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 44.8 11.2143820225 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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