The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to prompt writer’s more focus is more on the problem of increasing rapid pace of life than the solution which is already founded by the many peoplein world, despite of solutions of many problem writer still thinks and worried about the other problem which is may not solved or which is on the way to get a authentic solution - As per my view I am mostly Diagree with the statement due to below pivots.
First, In this world Human beings are the newest living being which are more developed than others species - because we have solved many problem of our day today life, such as “Food” - Yes we have solved the very important and vital element of our day to day life but our ansestor back in ice age struggled to get the food for their day today life, some people were died because of Malnutrition, For instance many beggars in street of india died just because of food which is still not understandable in 21st century, Writer have to look on the base need of the human life that is Food the biggest problem of all time but we have the solution via many recent online food delivery app you can get the food in your hand within a 15min.
Second, Human life is very precious and other life also but human came up with the soluition to save the life of every human being after solving the food problem which was the based need, For example In village and backword communities who still lived in forest in India don’t get the emergency facilties in todays 21st Century because of that many people die just because they haven’t got the medication on time, Safety of one life is the human rights and every human stood up for that because we have the facilies now.
Third, Human Life is full of mystery and science where some believes in Science and Some Do not believes in it and there is also ambiguous state of thiest and atheist which is still a contradictory and we do have many thinker, philosopher, scientist to debat on this topic to guide the human kind, lets imagine a hypothetical situation where you have to choose one option over two option and for both there certain fix daunting fear because of there believe then it will be very difficult to choose in between because of religious conflict, We have certain soltion in human life but still we are working on it
Of course there is Problem in life Budhha also said “ Problems in Life are fixed we have to deal with it “ - Either you love it or hate it problems are there since we have started the human life in this earth but once should not forget that every problem has its own solution we have to be optimistic rather than pessimistic and make the problem disparage from the smile in our face.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ot solved or which is on the way to get a authentic solution - As per my view I a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st living being which are more developed than others species - because we have so...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...others species - because we have solved many problem of our day today life, such as “Food” -...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause we have the facilies now. Third, Human Life is full of mystery and scienc...
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Message: Did you mean 'believe'?
Suggestion: believe
...ome believes in Science and Some Do not believes in it and there is also ambiguous state...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thinker seems to be countable; consider using: 'many thinkers'.
Suggestion: many thinkers
...is still a contradictory and we do have many thinker, philosopher, scientist to debat on thi...
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...ere is Problem in life Budhha also said “ Problems in Life are fixed we have to d...
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... Life are fixed we have to deal with it “ - Either you love it or hate it problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, third, for example, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48261758691 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25033135597 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470347648262 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 122.0 23.0359550562 530% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.730306396 60.3974514979 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 548.0 118.986275619 461% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 122.25 23.4991977007 520% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 5.21951772744 527% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221195217293 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152730585732 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449499209573 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138624019094 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525058447861 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 60.8 14.1392134831 430% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -35.43 48.8420337079 -73% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 48.5 12.1743820225 398% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.89 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.5 8.38706741573 149% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.8971910112 219% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.8 11.2143820225 453% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.