government should not fund any scientific researches whose consequences are unclear
In this revolutionary era many introduction and development of technologies considered
as myth are made possible today. These were made possible mainly by scientific researches.
As the statement compliance, government must stop the fundings for the scientific researches
that does not provide unclear consequences. I personally consider this way due to
couple of reasons.
First of all, this type of fundings may lead to loss for government. The reasearch that
need large investment may or may not be produce successful result. For instance, if we
consider the production of jet engines; Instead of creating new model of engines, we
can develope the older one by increasing its efficiency. This take lesser money when
compared to producing the new model. Also we can not give assurance that new model lead
to success. Thus I consider that vacillating result will cause loss to the government.
Secondly, As the result is unclear it will cause some accidents in the end. This accidents
may cause harmful effect up to some major extent. For example, the researches based on nuclear
power. While exploring nuclear energy, it will cause many radioactive effect in the
people who subjecting. Even with the safety measures many employes of nuclear
power station gets affected. So we can say that eventually the unclear result will
cause destructive effect.
In conclusion, Many investment in researches result in successful outcome. However,
majority of researches lead in failure due to unclear results. because of the reasons
stated above I feel that funding in unclear result is a bad idea. We can overcome this
by making some good ideas and predicting accurate result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun introduction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many introductions'.
Suggestion: many introductions
In this revolutionary era many introduction and development of technologies conside...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...evelopment of technologies considered as myth are made possible today. These wer...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...evelopment of technologies considered as myth are made possible today. These wer...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...undings for the scientific researches that does not provide unclear consequences. ...
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Suggestion: Couple
...I personally consider this way due to couple of reasons. First of all, this typ...
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Suggestion: Need
...ss for government. The reasearch that need large investment may or may not be prod...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Can
... of creating new model of engines, we can develope the older one by increasing it...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Compared
...ficiency. This take lesser money when compared to producing the new model. Also we can...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... compared to producing the new model. Also we can not give assurance that new mode...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ot give assurance that new model lead to success. Thus I consider that vacillati...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rance that new model lead to success. Thus I consider that vacillating result will...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...accidents in the end. This accidents may cause harmful effect up to some major e...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Power
...mple, the researches based on nuclear power. While exploring nuclear energy, it wil...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... cause many radioactive effect in the people who subjecting. Even with the safety me...
^^^^^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...safety measures many employes of nuclear power station gets affected. So we can s...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Power
...ty measures many employes of nuclear power station gets affected. So we can say th...
^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cause
...at eventually the unclear result will cause destructive effect. In conclusion...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...lead in failure due to unclear results. because of the reasons stated above I feel th...
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Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lead in failure due to unclear results. because of the reasons stated above I feel th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stated
...clear results. because of the reasons stated above I feel that funding in unclear re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sult is a bad idea. We can overcome this by making some good ideas and predicting...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
... is a bad idea. We can overcome this by making some good ideas and predicting a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46641791045 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87701811548 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6033965301 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.25 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137964792334 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471350186985 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727810754386 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447911109828 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673414990815 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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