Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.

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Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.

The government is entitled to the responsibilities of enhancing the welfare and well-being of the citizens although the focus on which to undergird may differentiate at times. The imminent or foreseen problems may be allocated unequal attention depending on the situation of the country and although the recommendation suggests that the immediate problems be handled with priority, this essay will contend that both types of problems need to be dealt with equally earnest effort.

Admittedly, a myriad of people argue that the immediate problems deserve a higher allocation of attention since inept dealing with the alleviation of pressuring hardships may lead to the threatening of the stability of societies. As in the case of the epidemic diseases such as the Ebola virus or MERS, the containment of the infected patients are of utmost importance. If the containment is delayed, the number of people that contact and get affected by the disease will increase exceedingly. Similarly, immediate international conflicts also require instant attention as the hostility could exacerbate at any moment. For example, South Korea and North Korea have declared armistice, but such truce does not promise the perennial peace between the two countries. Although South Korea had tried to make amends and pursue a peaceful co-existence with North Korea through actions such as the sunshine policy and with constant discussions of unification, North Korea still threatens to launch nuclear missiles if the financial support ceases even to the current year of 2019. Thus, if imminent problems such as epidemic diseases and the international conflicts are not dealt with urgently, instability will dawn upon societies.

Nevertheless, anticipated problems also deserve equivalent attention germane to the currently prevailing problems with the same line of reasoning for the latter. Prospective problems determine the long-term stability of the society and without the adequate dealing of such issues, the society can suffer in the future. This can be seen in the example of the biodiversity problems regarding the cane toads. To solve the imminent problems eradicating the beetle pests depleting the sugar canes, cane toads were introduced in Australia. However, because of their toxicality, the indigenous species of Australia were harmed and vastly reduced in quantities due to such toxic perils. Thus, the biodiversity in Australia regarding its native species with had dire future consequences for the sustainability of native species. Another case is of providing a sustainable environment for the future regarding the International Space Station. Although environmental issues are not palpable to many at the moment, their impact has already become potential disasters. The aberrant climate changes and temperature anomalies of the sea surface such as El Nino and La Nina present increasing threats to the hospitality of our current living environment. Thus, future living situations need to be investigated and that is what the International Space Station has been doing by examing alternative habitats for humans in space. Therefore, the allocated attention for future problems should be tantamount to the present problems for the stability of societies.

After examining the necessity of attention to long-term and short-term problems respectively by the government, it may be logical to say that the two are closely related and can be solved with the handling of one. The issue of privacy has become increasingly problematic at the status quo and was heading for more dire consequences in the future. In 2018, Europe had set a unified guideline of the collecting, processing, and retaining of personal data for all that derive from or go through Europe called GDPR. This set a explicit and limpid guideline of whom to charge in the case of a data privacy violation and also set the standards for the prevention and violations of data privacy in the future. By dealing with the problems occuring now and preventing anticipated ones, the stability of the society is being established. Consequently, finding solutions that can alleviate both the long-term and short-term problems are recommended for the government.

In the light of above deliberation, the author’s claim has some truth within it; however, it is undeniable that it does not always hold true for all situations. Both problems need to be dealt with sincere effort and since they are intertwined, the most efficient use of effort may be achieved by implementing the measure that could deal with both types of problems.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 522, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...go through Europe called GDPR. This set a explicit and limpid guideline of who to...
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Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: ABOUT_WHO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of whom to'?
Suggestion: of whom to
...his set a explicit and limpid guideline of who to charge in the case of a data privacy vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 105.0 58.6224719101 179% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3874.0 2235.4752809 173% => OK
No of words: 715.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17102348808 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03863205361 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 345.0 215.323595506 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1223.1 704.065955056 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5826637036 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.357142857 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5357142857 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 5.13820224719 370% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19507024877 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510126210902 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547029461572 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103915679065 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474875887088 0.0667264976115 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 213.0 100.480337079 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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