Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The issue that the government should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problem of the future is a contentious one. While each side has its strength and weakness, I believe that the government need to make a balance between both for the development of the country. The country going to any type of the crisis the government need to focus on the solving the immediate problem of the society and need to focus and spend large amount of the money to take the country out of the crisis. While, when the country is not in serious crisis, the government need to take into account future problems for development and to make sure that the country never had a downfall.
When the country is undergoing the crisis where the people of the country are directly affected, the government priority is to resolve the country issues. For example, during the COVID-19 crisis affecting the world, the main aim of the government was to ensure the citizens’ safety. Due to the pandemic the large number of the peoples lost their jobs affecting the economy of the country. Hence the government tried to directly send the money to the poors to match the demand with the supply. If the supply increases without the demand, the economy of the country will reach the bottom-most point in thor history.
However when the world is not facing such type of the pandemic, the government need to take into account of the future problems. For example, in the past years, the government spent some amount of the money to improve the healthcare system of their country. Improving such sectors are helping today to fight against the pandemic.
Furthermore, for sector like infrastructure, the government must take into the account of the future problems as these serve and are asset to the country for decades. Population rise of the society or the development in the city must take into the account by government.
In conclusion, government actions depend on the situation of the country and its crucial for the government to take into the account of the future problems for the development of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87704918033 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59331648548 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42349726776 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.965715528 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197383986435 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787297643348 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123487043736 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108761826814 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883144678629 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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