Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Anticipation of future problems rises questions: What about the current problems?,What if current problems supercede the future problems?.
Generally, such questions comes in to the mind, when a government or an authority tries to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
But,then what about future problems if governemnt tries to solve the immediate problems of today?.In my consideration government should
try to solve aniticipated problems of future.
Why solve future problems?,firstly,let's take an example of unemployment.Unemployment is mostly viewed as the present problem.
Job paucity in almost all sectors is accelerating nowadays,due to covid-19 pandemic,and number of employees being fired is also
increasing.As a result, most of the people are jobless.So,many argue that government militated by refudiating the chinese products
to be sold in India, which is the big market in India;and source of employment for many.But now, government promote self made products
rather than importing from china;and urge small scale industries to be independent.Is this the solution of future problem or present?.
Government anticipated the future problem of unemployment by banning the chinese products;and urged to be independent, that means
many new industries will engender and it will eventually increase the employment rate.
Secondly,the most prominent problems of all;increasing carbon footprint.Earth's surface temperature is increasing due to the global warming
and it is resulting in the extinction of some spieces.Now,need not it should be viewed as current problem and immediately try to solve it?
Many argue that gasoline or internal combustion engine vehicles are the major contributor(after industries) to aggregate carbon content in
the atmosphere;and these should be solved immediately.Many suggest that combustion vehicle should be abondoned and electric vehicles should
be promoted.However, solution of reducing global warming is not instant solution.It is well said that "Every solution has pros and cons"
;so,considering it, no solution is ideal and problem of future should be anticipated to solve the problem of today, which is eventually the
problem of tommorrow.
In contrary, immediate problems also consist of natural calamities like: Flood,eartquake,tsunami,forestfires,etc;and it can not be predicted.
what are the problems caused by natural disaster? and why it should require immediate solution?.In the past there have been many cases of
natural disaster such as: tsunami in Japan,Bhuj earthquake,nepal earthquake,etc;and many lives were gone during these disasters.However,
many were also saved.Now, how government was succeed in saving the lives of many people?,Is it like government has anticipated the problems
that will be caused due to this catastrophic event?.No, government immediately decided to start the refugee camp and provide food and shelter
to needy.So , the priority should be based on type of problem.
Conclusively, most future problems are preceded by present problem and some require gradual soltuion rather than immediate solution.So, focus should
prioritized towards future problems without compromising the problems of present.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2785.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06753812636 5.05705443957 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00288825309 2.79657885939 143% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.201563446 60.3974514979 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.083333333 118.986275619 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.97078651685 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33475773063 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160936971454 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779888935476 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115900125837 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927672057854 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 14.1392134831 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 48.8420337079 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 12.1743820225 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 12.1639044944 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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