In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to what we know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand” said Albert Einstein. Every field whether it is arts, science, or business; without imagination, knowledge is useless. So, imagination is more important than knowledge.
First, lets take an example of Nicola tesla. He was an excellent imaginator. He first imagined the concept of bulb in his mind and then it came onto the paper. Despite of knowledge, his imagination led to the invention of bulb; which was considered as the pivotal invention of the century. So, it would have been possible if he would have just relied on his knowledge? No, because great inventions need imagination and then the amalgamation of knowledge and imagination makes it possible.
Second example is of the prominent entrepreneur, Elon Musk, founder of Paypal, Spacex, and TESLA. Elon musk was not well educated or having ample amount of knowledge; then how he became magnate of entrepreneurship? It was because of his imagination to change the technology sector of the world. He imagined that the conventional cars can be replaced by electric cars (though electric car concept was pretty old); and he combined technology with the automobile to build the most popular electric car company of all time -TESLA- So, imagination plays an important role in the invention of new technology.
Third, the Chinese business magnate Jack ma, who revolutionized the shopping sector by introducing Alibaba. Jack ma has dearth of knowledge and he always tells that he had been flunked from the school, universities and jobs multiple times, so, how he succeeds in developing such breakthrough app? Does he know how to write codes? No, his imagination to change the way people shop and to make every item or thing accessible to every individual led him to the development of the Alibaba groups.
In conclusion, imagination outweighs knowledge and plays the most important role in developing or changing the face of the existing technology. An artist is not an artist without imagination; similarly knowledge remains knowledge without imagination; which alone can not be used for the betterment of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be used for the betterment of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, similarly, so, then, third, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24043715847 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0454714306 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4376442772 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168506532157 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572984758573 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583398310307 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103133556193 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504557102775 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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