The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? use specific reasons and exmaples to support your answer
“Never, never give up”- which means keep trying and don’t stop until you reach your goal or destiny- may be considered as cliché for many or some, but for me it is the best motivational sentence, whenever I am stuck or feel like giving up. So, I agree with this statement and consider it as a jewel. For me never give up attitude is like a cherry on the cake, I am incomplete without it and this attitude make me keep going on in my life, no matter what the circumstances unfold. There are several reasons why I considered Never give up attitude should be incorporated in every individual’s life.
First, athletics or any sport is full of ups and downs, no matter how well trained you are or how astute you are; but, what do you think, how the greatest players of all time overcome such ups and downs? Its simply because of their “Never, never give up” attitude; they keep their heads up and don’t stop until they make it, which makes them greatest sportsperson. So, never give up attitude leads you to the greater wisdom and imbibes in you the attribute known as “patience”, which is essential to succeed in life.
Secondly, everyone knows that the Space research organizations are fascinating to many, but do you ever thought how difficult it is to devise any space mission? Many time it happens that out of ten missions, one or two achieve success, others just face the undesirable and undeserved failure. So why those one to two missions get success despite of previous failed mission? Its because, the attitude of keep going and never stop till the mission is accomplished, is what makes them successful scientists or space research organizations.
Therefore, I think “Never, never give up” statement holds its credibility, and it is incorporated by many great personalities, into their daily life, no matter what field h/she is in. So, never give up on your goals and keep going till you make it, rather than just giving up in between.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72433037509 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529239766082 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2520386747 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378634982543 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1436958354 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997182044885 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241423176618 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11427941107 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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