Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
In any country, there are plentiful problems occurring. The author claim that government urge to work more on solving the problems occurring now rather than trying to solve the future problem that will happen. I concede with this claim, the government needs to find out what is the problem of people and then try to solve that problem. I agree with this issue to some extent, trying to solve a problem that will occur in future like global warming also very beneficial.
Firstly, It is well known that today is the best time to start any work. The government should undoubtedly focus on a current issue. Likewise, give 24hrs electricity to every home in rural areas. Nowadays, in many countries unemployment rate is drastically increase, therefore, the government should create a new policy so many companies/factories attract to set up their manufacturing plant. Consequently, an unemployment rate will diminish.
Moreover, the government has to fulfill services in rural areas as they give in urban areas. For instance, In urban areas, there are many banks, hospitals, schools, colleges, and universities. This type of services are basic needs for every people, therefore, the government tries to provide all necessary needs in rural areas rather than wasting money in researches that will be or will not be help in future.
However, also need to focus on a long-term problem like global warming is a critical issue for the world. If we don’t do anything now the outcomes will be more dangerous in a couple of years. At that time problems are too big to fix on short time which leads to fatal disasters. The government needs to take some step to prevent this problem.
In sum, the statement at some point is right like create plenty of jobs, give electricity, provide necessary needs. Nevertheless, it overlooks many long-term issues, particularly global warming, who leads major problems in forthcoming years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... home in rural areas. Nowadays, in many countries unemployment rate is drastically increa...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...arches that will be or will not be help in future. However, also need to focus on a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11392405063 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84792545168 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9806722681 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355992664697 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102077709111 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11293643036 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163120955966 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135533655717 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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