Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The topic raises the controversial issue that government should invest in the arts as they do in the military. I would agree that government should invest both on arts and military equally for three main reasons.
To begin, the arts is the board category of musical, physical, and visual-spatial practices but in essence it contains ideas of self expression, creativity and freedom. Thus, art connects the cultures when don't speak the same language with the help of visual images overcoming the boundaries of language. Even within the people speaking the same language, it aids in exchange of ideas, emotions and values. Thus, arts plays in an imperative role in the development of a country. Ignoring the arts over the military won't serve any purpose. Arts is the cardinal part of the person's life. For instance, if the government spend good amount on the music by sponsoring the concerts, it will encourage the talented musicians to participate in such concerts and this will in-turn help highlight the country's music in a broad spectrum. The talented musicians also feel appreciated for such a gestures and try to follow the arts as a profession. Doing this, government is not only showcasing the country's musical talent but also encouraging people of the nation to pursue their passions over the lucrative jobs.
Further, the government investing on arts will proliferate the number of visitors from abroad. For instance, if there is any particular art festival held in our country, then there would be huge people across the world attending the program. This will clearly help in augmenting the financial condition of a country. More particularly, in India there is a great Indian Musical Festival held every year. In this festival, people from all over the world come and showcase their talents. By doing so, the government is attracting a lot of talented people across the globe to come to India. In fact, the people when they come to India, they travel to any other tourists places. This is lead to the in-flow of money by these tourists. This way, people also get to know about our culture and traditions. Thus, government investing on arts will pay dividends in terms of ticket charge and showcasing the talent which is present in out country. There, investing on art is a good idea.
Admittedly, the government should invest on military too. The prompt says the government should spend equally on arts and military but doesn't say that it should invest on one thing rather than other. So, the government investment on military should be same as before. Certainly, spending on military is must. There is no way of evading from it. A good investment is necessary on the military as there is no clue when there will be attack from other countries. Government should take care of people protecting from these attacks. The military equipments are very costly, therefore the huge investment on military is a must.That said, the investment on military shouldn't affect the arts and culture of the country.
In conclusion, although investment on military is massive, that doesn't mean we ignore arts.Therefore, the government should equally spend both on arts and military.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2661.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04933586338 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72798365038 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462998102467 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1154309243 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8387096774 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51612903226 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477686988805 0.243740707755 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134045711168 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13075428419 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324475588252 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149467815134 0.0667264976115 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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