Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor

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Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Government are criticized for many different aspects and actions. no matter what, and this assertion is a particular example. The alternatives in the statement are not (rather, should not!) be at contrast because of the importance of both for a country. Art encourages the overall layout and creativity of a nation or province whereas, military is the major pillar of security of one. Here comes in play the circumscribed union budget, which is not addressed in the statement but plays a much crucial role in determining the investment in a particular segment, in a given year.

Art defines the aesthetic outlook of the country while military aims in protecting and providing security to the people. Amount of investment in art and military is not supposed to have a direct correlation: it is a mere case of circumstances and country's economical as well as geographical standing. For instance, if a nation has diabolical neighboring countries or is approaching a war like situation, their primary concern would be protecting their people and the country and enhancing the artistic domain. In such case, the government should not be forced or approached to invest equally in art and military.

On the contrary, during a situation of economic crisis or a situation which needs bolstering their financials; the government would rather focus on art and similar aspects which directly modulates the economics conditions: as art would bring in tourists, and foreign investments. During such situation, the government should restrict their spending on military accordingly.

Pressuring or castigating the governments plan or budget on the basis of comparing investment in art and military is not only the perspective: as there are many other factors convoluted. Above stante recommendations would help increasing flexibility and stability over time.

Determining just on the basis of art and military is not sufficient and making a strict protocol is would stringent the prosperity of citizens even more. So, government should decide the investment in art and military based on their current situation and position among other nations of the world in order to thrive and provide their citizens better life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3553008596 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07841487179 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5163469608 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16018453247 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547028658292 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378262702302 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900518428389 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156887133476 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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