Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
From my perspective of view, the education fee and tuition ought to be free to some students in certain circumstances rather than just blandly free of charge to all the students.
Fist of all, if the all the colleges and universities cancel the tuition of all the students, the economic pressure of the universities and the minister of national education would burgeon so that there will be much risk of cutting down the salaries of teachers and employees, which would extremely degrade the teaching quality. For the plebeian as us, the burden of taxing has been a daunting one so that we have to take consideration seriously.
Moreover, some may insist that it will be instrumental for students to get all charges free so that they can study without burden. However, the scholarships and fellowships exited have largely mitigate the problem for the students in poor economy of continuing education. It is more effective to courage parsimonious students contingently, which can be a win-win to both students and universities.
Furthermore, the scholarships that cover the tuition are more attractive to the students who diligently throw themselves into learning thus it can kindle the fervent of studying to more students. If a student works hard, the scholarships will be a large encouragement to him or her to keep abreast with the top. On the contrary, the students would lose their excitement and enthusiasm in studying in terms of indiscriminative freedom of charge.
To draw a conclusion, the statement that governments are supposed to offer university education free of charge to all students sounds plausible, while the indiscriminative uninterest is a specious one, which is not only a weighty burden to the plebeian but also a snag of squelching students’ enthusiasm of learning. Thus, the scholarships and fellowships existed could be an instrumental way to conseil the contrary of lighting students’ burden and encouraging students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'mitigated'.
Suggestion: mitigated
...ips and fellowships exited have largely mitigate the problem for the students in poor ec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20575468328 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3507367278 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.272727273 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200049788186 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754896319461 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529055237885 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116917236954 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384508426802 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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