Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition

The author contends that governments should offer students who cannot afford the tuition and has been admitted to a university. From my perspective, the government does need to find ways to help those students to go to university, but free education is not an ideal proposal. On the contrary, the government should cooperate with universities to provide suitable off- or on-campus work, based on those students' financial conditions, so that their income can cover their tuition and even partly living expenses.

First, think about the enormous ungraduated students' loan; if this policy comes true, the vast money may transform into the government's financial pressure. It is reasonable that students would like to apply for free education instead of the loan to reduce their stress since they cannot afford tuition indeed. One thing we must take into consideration is that the government itself cannot make money, and all its expenditure relies on every hard-working taxpayer. There are only two ways for the government to implement this policy. One is to collect more tax, which is already very high and is onerous financial pressure for poor people. Conduct this policy would add more stress to them, making them live harder than before. Another way is to cut down other expenditures, but most government revenue is necessary for the country to run smoothly, such as medical coverage and infrastructure investment. If money on theses filed declines, it would render more potential adverse effects.

Moreover, this statement's advocate may assert that students who cannot afford the tuition must cherish the precious opportunity to get a free college education. On the contrary, people are more likely to value what they make efforts to acquire, whatever they spend money or time compared to the free stuff. If we offer free education, the chances are that students may not take lessons and homework seriously, which may lead to a low GPA, a disadvantage for them to find a job in the future. Nevertheless, what if we let students make efforts to earn the tuition and their living expenses; what if the government cooperates with universities to offer enough suitable job positions for students related to their majors and covers their expenditures? Students who earn their tuition by themselves would be motivated to study more demanding because they know what they have paid for this hard-won opportunity exactly.

Admittedly, offering free education for those who cannot afford it can attract more students to university. Although students can apply for a loan in the past, there is no guarantee that everyone could get the lion, since some students are too poor to squeeze into the loan candidate list. However, it does not mean that subsidizing in terms of work has little attraction to those students. In contrast, self-dependent students, who are willing to changing their life by their efforts, would be more likely to get further education in this way. Additionally, equipped with such a strong will, those students are more likely to achieve their success and contribute to society in the future.

In conclusion, providing free education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford it seems an acceptable policy. However, offering them a suitable job to earn tuition may be a better solution since it does not increase the government's financial pressure, and motivated self-dependent students to study harder.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2906.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20788530466 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78847748519 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480286738351 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6538884561 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.347826087 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2608695652 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395093173067 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125292077765 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153370734444 0.0758088955206 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278893059369 0.150359130593 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140905843127 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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