Providing free education for the financially poor student and everyone in need is healthy sign of education system. In a country where everyone is considered as equal it might bring a dilemma. Although everyone is treated equal under the law as a society it is necessary to provide right to education to each and every citizen. When these students who come from rural background they suffer problems with money. If the person is really in need of money he should be supported, not just by the government but also by the society.
People living in countryside, rural area have no exposure, many cannot provide three meals a day let alone education, in such case if students get opportunity to study in university it the duty of the government to help them financially. It would be greedy by the people if they do not come forward to help those students. There are many at times when people are talented and interested in studying but cannot pursue further education because they are unable to pay the tuition fee. This vacant seat maybe occupied by student who maybe less focused in worst case ineligible person. This not only deteriorates the standard of education but is bane to the nation. Providing scholarship for students who perform well in academics and are in financial jeopardy, scouting for intellectuals in rural areas, these initiatives must be taken up by the government. But there maybe crooks who utilise these circumstances to their advantages, forging income certificate to obtain scholarship event when they can afford for education. These kind of malpractice must be a looked after.
In short there is necessary for scholarship and or funds that needs to be channelised for the better education system. A proper aid based on their annual income needs to be set which creates apathy towards every student. A strict surveillance need to maintained to avoid misuse of funds. To sum up a new initiative must be taken up the government to help the poor students to join university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to education to each and every citizen. When these students who come from rural back...
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Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...upied by student who maybe less focused in worst case ineligible person. This not only d...
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Line 2, column 1023, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ent when they can afford for education. These kind of malpractice must be a looked after. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, so, well, in short, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93471810089 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79129294276 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1901843057 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152650887808 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448071710042 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320067006209 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994279226905 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307747895042 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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