The advent of new technology haved paved way for the growth of science , reasoning and an end to superstition. Other the last the last few two hundered years man has invented and inculcated new technology in order to crub problems. When we compare the life of humans in the 18th century to the current lifestyle it has alleviated to a high state.
Technology is an alternative for solution, when we look at the discovery of any new technology the cause for invention is mainly because there was problem existing and people work towards over coming it. For instance, Electricity was invented by Edison to light up bulbs as there no proper method to limunate in the night. Although there were lamps which cosumed fat to burn these were dangerous, at times it could burn down a house. Technology is a solution to the problems, need less to say it is increase the comfort of humans.
Over the years new inventions has improved to the connectivity among people, with a smart phone today you can can talk to people around the globe. This saves time, in the early ages people used pigeons to convey messages which was no guarantee and later postal system came into existence. Technology has not just saved time but also life of humans with high tech equipments in hospitals it is easy to detect diesease and operate.
But there may draw backs too, technology might be a boon to humans but it is cause to the extinction of many animals. The cell phones signals that we use is harmful for bees which makes it difficult to navigate. The autobile that we consider as the greatest invention in the transportation history is causing global warming, which not olny effects the lives of aimals but also humans.
To conclude technology is a real advantage to humans considering the problems it has solved. We can travel faster, talk to any one any where. With all the above explaination we can say that humans are living comfortable with the help of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aved paved way for the growth of science , reasoning and an end to superstition. O...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the last'.
Suggestion: the last
...oning and an end to superstition. Other the last the last few two hundered years man has invented...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w technology in order to crub problems. When we compare the life of humans in the 18...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the current lifestyle it has alleviated to a high state. Technology is an alter...
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Suggestion: can
...ng people, with a smart phone today you can can talk to people around the globe. This s...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...s solved. We can travel faster, talk to any one any where. With all the above explainat...
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Suggestion: anywhere
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are living comfortable with the help of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71554252199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61161367239 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2655074382 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105442772178 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033393722657 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358992327073 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583222656099 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221362504964 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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