Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Government is the body or system to look upon the citizen, to provide them facilities. Education is the fundamental part of the life, education drives us towards our destination. I strongly agree with the above statement that free university must be made by the government to provide education for them who has been admitted but can’t afford the tuition fee.
First and foremost, everyone has the right to have education and is has the significant importance in today’s technological world. If a person wants to be successful or want have a career in some field than he has to take the college degree. However, not every citizen can afford the costly college degree since the cost of the education is burgeoning and poor people can’t afford that costly education. Rather, government should have eye on them and advocate those people who really have the interest to have education and offer the fee waiver. Furthermore, to develop the country it’s the government responsibility to make the citizen literate.
Firstly, those poor people who can’t afford the tuition fee, know the real importance of education or they are there in the university with real interest. These peoples come there by their own interest not by the complement of their parents. These people if they would like to study than they would be in their home and help their parents rather going to the colleges. However, all the poor people might be of the same type, but majority of these needy people are laborious and the have their mindset that if they get to have opportunity to study they will do better.
Lastly, the government should encourage these needy people to provide the education, since these are the people who want to grasp knowledge or education with their inner heart, the government shouldn’t be aloof on such matter. As, it is certain people who have their knowledge with keen interest do better rather than those who are there for study by pressure of their parent. Moreover, by encourage those type of people to learn there would be reform in their family or their group. Those group who have been backward from the past may be uplifted.
To sum up, the government should provide these need people with the free education, since it help to uplift the backward group who have been fall back or taken in lower rank in society, and it is the matter of development of the country as the people are educated the country will be developed as they come will the new, innovative ideas which help in enhancing the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'eyed'.
Suggestion: eyed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, really, so, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90951276102 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58384312274 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443155452436 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0389532016 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.470588235 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235949074669 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865108773439 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938781180628 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155587873731 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760823993274 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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