Governments should provide funding for artists so that the arts can flourish and be available to all people.
The issue topic debates that the government should provide funding for artists so arts can flourish and be available to all people. I totally agree with this. Most of the artists who has not yet been in the limelight are struggling to get their first opportunity. if government invests proper amount of money on these artists their talents can be revealed to the world. Spending on these artists doesn't mean that the government should blindly invest on these artists. The artist's art should first qualify certain criteria inorder to be eligible. these specifications depend on various requirements government is expecting from the art.
advertising the art is very important. if no advertisements are there for the particular work people might not know about the work. Nowadays more money is spent on advertisements inorder to reach many people. With a good advertisement people will come to know that the art exists. The ones who are interested in the art might buy the art. Thus the artist earns more money.
Only if there is proper investment the artists can try something new, which is novel and not been tried before. The basic amount of capital is needed for new types of arts. people always like to see something new, which is also aesthetically pleasing. The art might become and hit or might become a failure but the artists work is always trying something new. To do new types of work investment is the main thing.
Some of the equipments to do a particular artwork are very expensive. Some artists might not have sufficient money to buy the equipments. The government funding might be useful for those kinds of artists. Not all the artists come up with a excellent work on their first attempt, the basic investments are required for the artist to come up with an better work. The resources should be available readily.
government providing funds for the budding artists might play an key role in development of the art field. The artists therefore might get proper exposure. advertising the art, for the basic public relation work sufficient amount of money is needed. if the artist has sufficient of money he or she can try new type of artwork and because of proper advertisements people might come to know about the artwork and try to buy those. As a result the artists earns money and new types of arts are produced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64907531037 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6633959734 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424030610298 0.243740707755 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116926569557 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137783799191 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238971272201 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134598443717 0.0667264976115 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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