Human activity is the only reason for potential extinction of animals.
Nature by itself maintains equilibrium between all the species. Humans' inordinate activities have disturbed this homeostasis.To mention a few, Deforestation for construction of heights have snatched away their innate shelter, Pollution from uncontrolled use of vehicles have disturbed their limpid ambience. It's very poignant that their foods have been spoiled by chemicals and plastics that chokes their intestine. furthermore, humans' greed for parchyderm has cost a huge loss to animals' family. Though the nation earns good revenue from exhibiting the animals in zoo, it failed to realise the pain they have created to them by limiting their freedom. It's elicited from above examples that almost all of their senses' desires have been worsened. these stir up a quandary situation to animals.
Natural disasters could also effect, but nature reconciles the balance. In food cycle Herbivorous eat plants, these are consumed by carnivorous which in turn become prey for larger carnivorous and the cycle remains perpetual. This chain is perturbed by human activities. Thus, human interference have vehemently affected the animals' inborn habitat due to which they have become extinct.
It might be controversial that development wouldn't have happened without these activities, but will one be happy after an ill wind that blows nobody good?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5637254902 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79933723001 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696078431373 0.4932671777 141% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3525945392 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5833333333 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119737624444 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436987680871 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474218958479 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663608403194 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471366864777 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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