It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Some people say that making new contacts would be beneficial. Having friends in all streams could help whenever one gets trapped in predicament. However, I strongly disagree with these people and argue that old friends are more important to maintain than making new friends. I will support my viewpoint with following three reasons.
Firstly, we have known old friends from a very long time, they have been watching us grow and so does the famous saying goes, “Old is Gold”. There are only few people with whom our interest aligns, such rare ones tend to be with us through our school days and teenage. They have seen us face hurdles, they are very familiar with our likes and dislikes. To people with whom we recently got in touch, it would take a quite long time for them to understand our likes and dislikes. In fact, our interests keep changing periodically and our old friends tend to keep a whole record of it. For instance, I have my school best friend, her name is Neha. During my first birthday in college, I received many gifts from my new friends but her present really enthralled me because she gave me the thing which I was really in need of. Even my family members could not recognise that I needed a wrist watch.
Secondly, maintaining old friends is really essential because we have had made many memories in the past. With new friends, we might make gossips, talk about current scenario in office or college, but with old friends- one would be taken aback to the beautiful time like school days where we led a tension free joyous life. What could be more rejuvenating than discussing sweet old memories. For instance, I had exam in around ten days, I was really tensed and worried as there was lot of syllabus to complete. I called up one of my old friends, we talked and I got to know regarding my other old friends, their situations, what career they were pursuing and so on. We laughed, giggled and enjoyed. After the talk, I felt relaxed and continued my preparation with calm mind.
Finally, one cannot find out whether the new friend is trustworthy or not. It happens many times that the real character of the person comes out after some period of time. It had happened with my roommate, she considered her new friend very loyal and used to tell her all secrets. One day, it turned out that the girl used to spread calumny about my roommate and that damaged her name in college.
To conclude, the issue of whether it is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends is very complex. Some suggest that one should interact with every people, make them friend, so that whenever you need help many people will come forward for help. Nevertheless, I still contend that keeping in touch with old friends is more important than making new friends as we are always assured that no matter what our old friends are very loyal and would definitely come forward to help us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 22.412803532 335% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2414.0 1373.03311258 176% => OK
No of words: 518.0 270.72406181 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66023166023 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.04702891845 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35114608788 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 145.348785872 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505791505792 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 419.366225166 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 3.25607064018 737% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1361021954 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 4.33554083885 507% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356418921685 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109151642201 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149791497776 0.0662205650399 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239382771008 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141796160275 0.0443174109184 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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