Opportunities do not come to people by luck. Instead, the most successful people are the ones that are constantly seeking out opportunities.
Humans have been developing the planet over millennia through perpetual creation and innovation. Oppurtunities have never touched the feet of great minds, in the craze to do good, to serve people they identified the problems their colleagues face, put themselves into their shoes to analyse it and put their brains to work to find solution which would ease their lives. There’s some or the other problem that impinges people in our surroundings, some realise it and turn the problem into a challenge, thus create opportunity. Subsequently, we have many successful entrepreneurs, whose inventions have simplified our daily lives.
Starting with the greatest invention in science: Invention of wheel that has made transport possible and has saved our precious time that can be used for development and invention of various other things. During pre-historic age, school didn’t exist, here was no science, no maths infact no language, it was the need that created the opportunity. Yes, our ancestors should be remembered for the such flabbergasting invention.
God has blessed our planet with awesome brains. A women from a small village in India used to be very passionate about passion, she failed in her bachelors, yet she chased her interest. She used to roam around villages, fair, shops, towns. She then realised that market lacked some modernity in handbags, she started designing handbags and sold them in fairs. Soon her handbags were in great demand, consequently she designed handbags on large scale. This women, Nina Lekhi, the Founder of Baggit has now the largest turnovers in the market.
There are mammoth examples that can be cited. We all are well aware of Apple. Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak founded apple in 1970s. Computers did exist in those days. But, they noticed that such big computers made it very cumbersome to use thus attenuating its efficacy- again an opportunity!. Thus, they came up with aesthetic and mobile models. Same goes with inshorts- news app that uses only 30 words to describe a news. Newspaper do exist. But, PEOPLE are too lazy to go through its entire content- again creating an opportunity. Today, we can find this app downloaded in almost every mobile. The founders of this app were felicitated with multifarious awards.
It is tacit from above examples that Opportunities do not come to people by luck. People who constantly are keen to solve problems find oppurtunities and reach Zenith. Oppurtunities can be found everywhere- need (lead to invention of wheel), lack (as stated in baggit example), modification (evident from Apple & Inshorts) of any thing in market. Thus, one has to hunt for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: A woman; Women
...blessed our planet with awesome brains. A women from a small village in India used to b...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...essed our planet with awesome brains. A women from a small village in India used to b...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...y she designed handbags on large scale. This women, Nina Lekhi, the Founder of Bagg...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...large scale. This women, Nina Lekhi, the Founder of Baggit has now the largest tu...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1970s'.
Suggestion: in the 1970s
...ve Jobs and Steve Wozniak founded apple in 1970s. Computers did exist in those days. Bu...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nded apple in 1970s. Computers did exist in those days. But, they noticed that su...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...app that uses only 30 words to describe a news. Newspaper do exist. But, PEOPLE are to...
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Line 9, column 321, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...cation evident from Apple & Inshorts of any thing in market. Thus, one has to hunt for it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, then, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1716937355 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78595151587 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61716937355 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7585626912 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6071428571 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3928571429 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116984199673 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315293594878 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690942554626 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703198647769 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825993999443 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.