Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time.
Some youngsters point out that getting freedom from parents at an early stage makes them independent and matured. However, I strongly disagree with these youngsters and believe that young adults should stay with their families for a longer time. I will support my viewpoint with three reasons.
First of all, living with family members has many positive effects because one spends more time with their loved ones. For example, whenever a child feels low, his mother easily recognizes the problem and tries to mitigates it by giving various solutions that the boy cannot think due to subsided thoughts. If the child stays in hostel or dormitory and does not talk to his mother, the problem creates tensions that eats up his brain. It is important to stay with families, especially parents until one gets matured enough to handle all the responsibilities on his own. There are high chances that even in future the adult might face situations where only parental love can help mollify them.
Secondly, joint families have a connection among its members that creates intense happiness and feeling of joy. One feels like heaven by spending time with their family. For instance, celebrating festivals with family members creates pleasure that cannot be expressed in words. On the other hand, those who stay out of their country, away from home miss these joyous moments and do not create any memories. One does not require to stay with their family members for their life time but spending qualitative time with family helps not only in understanding the problems, situations but also achievements undergone by one’s blood relative.
Finally, whenever we need help, it is our family that shows most concern and is always there to support us. Let’s take an example where a person faces a serious health problem. His parents especially are present no matter how far he stays from home. His relatives pray for his good health. No care is shown when one does not spend qualitative time with his relatives during his child and adulthood. Thus, the perks of having a good relation with families cannot be bought or purchased. It has to be maintained.
To conclude, the situation of whether to live with their families for a longer time or not is complex. Getting freedom from parents soon does have positive side. Some suggest that one gets matured early because at an early stage itself he sees the world and becomes independent. Nevertheless, I still contend that young adults should live with their families for a longer time as it is the only time people get to interact and talk, once they get job or go abroad, they will surely miss it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mitigate'.
Suggestion: mitigate
...ily recognizes the problem and tries to mitigates it by giving various solutions that the...
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Line 9, column 429, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: staying
...eate any memories. One does not require to stay with their family members for their lif...
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Line 9, column 473, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...tay with their family members for their life time but spending qualitative time with fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9730941704 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45661442907 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553811659193 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.58268557 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368763299593 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100031640896 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102027273407 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227318438395 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106768683476 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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