"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
The statement raises the controversial issue, whether the machines are superior to humans or not. Indisputably machines can perform various task accurately which human may not. Nevertheless after all machines are made by humans only. From human mind only the machines have got birth. So I disagree with this statement, machines are not superior than humans and can never be.
In today’s world mechanization is increasing continuously and several activities which were performed manually are been replaced by machines. These machines humans have created to ease out his task. So the origin of machines is human mind only. Although human like machines are unable to perform task precisely and speedily. But machines don't have ability of thinking or logical reasoning. Due to which human can solve different problem differently and can reach to accurate results. While machines work on same algorithm which humans have provided to it. Another fact, machines can't run on their own unless humans command it. So it is impossible that machines become superior to humans. It is like if there is rod of 100mm radius and it is compressed to thinner radius rod the volume of new rod would be either equal or less not more than original one. Similarly machine can't exceed humans.
Admittedly, in some cases it has been seen that machines had become an indispensable part of human life. Like if one has to travel very long distance, he well choose a transportation machine for travelling that distance. Or let’s take the example of air conditioner, a air conditioner company have surveyed that every 90 houses out 100 used A/C and they can't imagine their life without it, especially in summers. Similarly, calculator
In conclusion, although machine work speedily and precisely than human. But the human have created it and human have ability to destroy it too. Machines are nothing unless humans make use of it. So I disagree with this statement, machines are not superior to humans and can never be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...us task accurately which human may not. Nevertheless after all machines are made by humans o...
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Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...is statement, machines are not superior than humans and can never be. In today&ap...
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Suggestion: don't
...sk precisely and speedily. But machines dont have ability of thinking or logical rea...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntly and can reach to accurate results. While machines work on same algorithm which h...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... provided to it. Another fact, machines cant run on their own unless humans command ...
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Suggestion: Similarly,
...ual or less not more than original one. Similarly machine cant exceed humans. Admitted...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re than original one. Similarly machine cant exceed humans. Admittedly, in some c...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...s to travel very long distance, he well choose a transportation machine for travelling...
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Suggestion: an
...;s take the example of air conditioner, a air conditioner company have surveyed t...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ery 90 houses out 100 used A/C and they cant imagine their life without it, especial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, while, after all, as to, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1094224924 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71466179827 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4039321396 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0869565217 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3043478261 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375795816706 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147260685572 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810215693423 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27288705251 0.150359130593 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111441638162 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.