Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
“Jack of all master of none” we all have heard this saying. In this competitive world it is necessary take knowledge of all fields. so it should be started from early stage of life. I agree with this recommendation, universities should need every student to take variety of courses which are not much related to their field.
studying different courses can help the student in many ways. Very few students are sure with their liking and disliking from young age. As we all know our hobbies, liking, disliking all changes as we grow elder. so studying different courses outside the student’s field allow him/her to know his/her true interest and in which field he can do well.
some of the students select their field by the influence of their surrounding or parents. And in some case parents forces too. In both the cases if student get opportunity to study different courses, he/she can either came to know his/her area of interest or he/she can decrease the level of boredom related to studies and can do overall well.
As we all know now a days competition are increasing day by day. In this, it becomes essential to have little knowledge of all fields. it helps one in many ways like no one can easily fool you; one can provide his/her response in discussion of any field. Directly or indirectly it helps not to fear doing off course things in life.
However, there is some disadvantage of doing this. Not all are good at everything. Sometimes it happens that some off course courses consume more energy of students and as a result of it they unable to do well in any of the courses, even they are capable of doing well in their regular courses.
after seeing all facts and consequences I believe that this practice should be followed by all universities. after all its in good will for students only and this recommendation many students have get their right way to move forward in his/her career life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...necessary take knowledge of all fields. so it should be started from early stage o...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are not much related to their field. studying different courses can help the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Studying
...ot much related to their field. studying different courses can help the student ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...disliking all changes as we grow elder. so studying different courses outside the ...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t and in which field he can do well. some of the students select their field ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... in which field he can do well. some of the students select their field by t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... in which field he can do well. some of the students select their field by the infl...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to studies and can do overall well. As we all know now a days competition ar...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...do overall well. As we all know now a days competition are increasing day by day. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...rall well. As we all know now a days competition are increasing day by day. ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...to have little knowledge of all fields. it helps one in many ways like no one can ...
^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear doing off course things in life. However, there is some disadvantage of d...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doing well in their regular courses. after seeing all facts and consequences ...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... well in their regular courses. after seeing all facts and consequences I bel...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...should be followed by all universities. after all its in good will for students only ...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 198, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
... this recommendation many students have get their right way to move forward in his/...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, after all, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82738095238 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59774207513 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4158535862 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195812421994 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595165072621 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083859677639 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103157665317 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541368302569 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.