The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

Mind is that element of the human entity that enables them to think, feel and experience about the world around them, whereas machines are the creations of human minds intended to reduce human efforts whether mental or physical. The statement contends that human minds will always be superior to machines as the latter is just a tool of the former. Given that superiority implies the complete control of human minds over machines, rather than better performance in one task or the other, the former will remain superior, no matter how good the machine performs an assigned task.

Machines have limited intelligence and are designed to perform specific tasks in given circumstances. While they may perform an assigned task more efficiently than humans without fatigue or mistake, it requires the task to be well-defined. On the other hand, they may not be useful when the task is vague and requires human intellect either to perform an undefined task or to define the question and decide the subsequent steps to achieve the solution. For example, a translator programmed to translate the voice in one language into another cannot comprehend the voice modulation or nuances of human speech. Another compelling example is scientific research. Though computers can solve complex mathematical equations, they cannot formulate new scientific theories or bring about new inventions. Similarly, telescopes can It requires the abstract thinking or creativity of human mind to find the unknown or new invention. Therefore, machines are just tools to reduce human labour albeit with limited capabilities.

The debate about superiority of human minds over machines has recently intensified due to emergence of artificial intelligence and machine learning. Artificial intelligence is the ability of a machine to find solutions in any circumstances by imitating the human thought process rather than relying on a pre-designed algorithm. While researchers have achieved a limited success in developing these ‘smart machines, there is a concern if they can ultimately surpass the decision making abilities of human minds. However, this ever evolving technology that purportedly threats the superiority of ‘human mind’ is also its brainchild thus further corroborating the statement. Moreover, unlike these advanced machines, humans can learn from past experiences, modify their problem solving strategies and enhance their learning.

Moreover, one must not forget that a human mind is not just a decision making entity but has a combination of intelligence, emotions and to some extent spiritual quotients. No machine can ever emulate the latter two qualities. Machines can never make decisions requiring an emotional or ethical outlook. For example, in a scenario where a firm is making losses, unlike a sensible manager a ‘smart machine’ may suggest disproportionately higher job cuts without even considering the adverse effects of such a strategy on the lives of the loyal employees as well as on the reputation of the company. Or consider the case of international conflicts, computers despite their advanced intelligence cannot solve, say for example, the ‘middle east crisis’ which is purely a matter of human wisdom and expertise.

In conclusion, though machines can surpass human sin one aspect or the other, they are still designed, developed and controlled by the human mind. Since the argument extends the its validity to eternity by using ‘always’, it is safe to say that as long as human minds can create and control machines, it will remain superior to its tools.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3066.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 559.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48479427549 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04356948492 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520572450805 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 979.2 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5705170603 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.304347826 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3043478261 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43596193092 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138412945217 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117196823808 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2757190765 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113121324672 0.0667264976115 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 100.480337079 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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