1. The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
The above lines stating that the human mind will always be superior to machines as machines are only tools of human minds is a very subjective topic to be discussed. Rapid Industrialization and Urbanisartion had lead to sprouting of various top-notch firms in technological and scientific sectors thereby transforming villages into suburbs and sub urbs into large metropolises. The 21st century is known as the era of artificial intelligence where human dependency on robots and machines have increased rapidly. The advent of robotics and machines is considered as a blessing to the man kind as it ensures quicker response to any task be it mundane or cryptic.
These machines have made the everyday life of the humans quite easy. Such machine learning techniques have been incorporated in some of the world's largest firms so as make the customer website handy to the end users while accessing. machines have also been used in the automobile sector where they are programmed to perform various tasks in the form of logistics and tranportation. they help reduce the human effort and perform the tasks meticulously thereby improving the work effiency accross a particular place on a whole. having said that, there are some drawbacks to these machines while they are put into use at these corporations.
As far as the machines are concerned, no matter how efficient they might be they require a human mind for them to operate flawlessly. The humans program the machines accordingly for them to perform a plethora of tasks on a wide range. Let us consider an example of a computer which has be considered as one of the first machines to be ever developed by the humans. A computer can perform a variety of tasks ranging from the most basic calculations to shrewd coding. All of this needs human effort or a human brain for a computer to work else it might be left inert without any human intervention.
having said that even though the advent of robots and machines have made the world a better place to live, it still needs human effort and cognizance for it be a success on a wide scale. machine learning techniques and artificial intelligence (ai) have been used over a wide scale lately. For machine learning and ai, the backend has been the human mind involving thousands of hours of programming to make it the success it has garnered today. this clearly advocates the fact that these machines which are incorporated are just tools of human minds and cognizance. If a human fails to provide a command to the machine, it fails to work proactively waiting for the human response. this showcases the fact that the human mind is always superior than the machines as they are nothing but tools programmed by the humans.
In conclusion, will the human mind be superior to the machines? Yes. As there is no limit to how a person's mind operates on anology with that of a machine where it operates based on the commands given by the human, it is clearly evident from the above lines that the human mind is always superior to the machines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2515.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81800766284 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74701755717 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446360153257 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2312566984 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.318181818 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528980087755 0.243740707755 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189685242754 0.0831039109588 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166404620809 0.0758088955206 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346741238403 0.150359130593 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112393825693 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.