human mind will be always superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
I mostly agree with the prompt that human mind will be always superior to machines beacuse machines are only tools of human minds because of two reasons. however, there are some situations where the it is not true.
Firstly, to begin with, machines are the creation of the mankind and they are designed to make the arcane and laborious task of humans easier. For instance, the task of calculating a higher polynomial expression or determining the average of 'n' numbers can be performed by humans but there tasks consume more amount of time so the better alternative is to design a computer algorithm which does it for them. thus, eliminating the need to perform recurring actions. also, humans cannot lift heavy objects so they made machineries which does the work for them. Hence, demonstating the fact that machines are just the mere tools which are the imagination and prolific of mankind.
Further, the fact that the humans have formulated the attributes of machines such as speed, motion, accuracy, etc. clearly signifies humans as superior species as compared to machines. For example, while designing the features of a system humans decides that how much the movement of a certain part should be, by what speed it should move, by what degree of angle it should be perfect.thus, defining the superiority of humankind.
however, in some cases such as in the case of artificial intelligence the computer learns by its own self and acts upon its learning which is similar to human behavior of an infant who tries to learn new things. but, this is also a creation of human brain and if the results of the machines in AI seems to be inimical to humans it can be simply turned off. thus, I would conclude by incling towards the promt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81939799331 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5861256727 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9650972034 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447780612626 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144621285447 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177893558279 0.0758088955206 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297757469594 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183655900938 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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