When we talk about the goals of us to chase after, we should evaluate from different attitude. This issue concerns the value of goal. We should discern the diversity of goals and the means of worthy instead of consider it as an "all or nothing" essay. Any means means every method we can use, which could be harmful to us or others.
To begin with, we need to define the goal which is worthy. There are so many target we are fighting for during our life time. While talking about the worth of a goal, it may be a private or public issue. For private, a couple of lovers could do something crazy even stupid while they think to be meaningful, like to being devoted to love, they will tear up two movie tickets which were not on the show yet to prove their love forever. This is some experts asserts that lovers are stupid when they fell into love river at the first eighteen months, very precise indeed. So they could do something meaningless by other people's eyes but do not be specious. Most of us fell into love once before.
In addition, there are other kinds of people who considered as stupid when they insist on their enterprises. Yes, the truthness of human being, the most glamorous goal in my mind.
Copernuious, who insisted heliocentroism instead of geocentroism, died on fire. While the fire set by the patrician did not burn up his faith, the faith of chasing for human-being's truthness. In the end the time talks, as it should be, the goal of Copernuious was not comprehended by others while it did not mask the worth of the goal which evolved us to make more progress in the astromony field.
I really appriciate the determination of people who struggle for their goals that weren't understood by others. While we should reconsider these goals whehter to be meaningful.
For lovers on behalf of individual issue, it is justifiable for them to take any means to chase for the goal. While one more thing is that their goals should not violate the ethics and laws. For the public I belive, due to the development of our society, it is more comprehensible for the goals which can not be know to people for the first time, the issue of Copernious' story may not happen again.
On the contrary, if you violate the laws and ethics, it would be not proper to chase for the goal which considered as worthy. Like Hitler, who thought German people were the most clever and strongest human being in the world , other race especially Jewish should be expelled. In the end, another story was known to all of us, the German failed , because its leader chased for a harmful goals to human beings.
In conclusion, I do not agree with this issue partly, we should take this issue objectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60950413223 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48486502326 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495867768595 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7589007259 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.24 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.36 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169620931833 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535221047789 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595374942137 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813979810715 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432409486874 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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