If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everyone has a goal in life and completing that goal is the dream of that person. To complete that goal, whether it is worthy or not, the person will try his best by adopting several ways and methods that may or may not be justifiable. However, wrong means taken to complete a goal cannot be justified. Therefore, in my opinion, i strongly disagree with the author’s claim as there are different and proper means to succeed in life and complete our goals.
Though a goal may be worthy, however not more than someone’s life. For instance, recently, there was a pervasive pandemic in the world, known as ‘’COVID-19’’, which affected many people and cost them their lives. All the different scientists of the world are trying to make vaccines for this virus by taking several means. Making the vaccine for this virus is an important goal for any scientist in the world. However, the means taken to make it should be justifiable. Making the COVID-19 vaccine is a necessary goal, but making someones’s life in risk is not justifiable. To make the vaccine, the doctors and scientists are performing different experiments and operations on different people, making their life in risk. Therefore, it is crucial to make the vaccine but not by any means that could harm someone.
Secondly, Is it justifiable to do a crime to attain something? The answer to this question is obviously not. For Example, Consider a parent who is not very opulence, but wants to send his intelligent student to abroad for further studies for his successful career ahead. For this, the parents tries to obtain a loan from the bank, However, they are refused for loan because of their financial conditions. Since, they were very reluctant to send their child abroad for further studies they thought of doing a crime by stealing money from someone’s house. Therefore, though money is important for them but doing a crime won’t be a right solution. Hence, there should be proper means taken to attain any goal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89675516224 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74911693944 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7473526931 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14147966328 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520665322351 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369400108732 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094138351911 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0038425199639 0.0667264976115 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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