The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to the author, the surest indicator of a great nation is by the general welfare of its people and not by the achivements of its rulers, artists or scientists. Though, a great nation is build because of its people. So, the general welfare of the people plays an important role in deciding the success of a nation. However, in my opinion, the achievements of the nation’s rulers, artists and scientists are equally important indicator of a nation’s success because of the following two reasons.
The inventions, discoveries and missions done by the scientists, cannot be neglected as they are an important indicator of a great nation. For instance, consider the mass mission, known as “mission mangal”, done by The ISRO (Indian Space Research Organization). In this mission, the scientists of ISRO, in its first attempt were successfully able to send the satellite on mass with the lowest cost, making a world record. It was one of the most successful missions in the record of the nation which made the entire nation proud. Therefore, these achievements cannot be neglected and are crucial in the success of a nation.
Secondly, as one wheel alone cannot balance the whole load. General welfare of the people are equally important to the achievements. If the people are not satisfies by the rules and regulations of the nation, the nation cannot be successful.
In conclusion, as we all know that clap cannot be done only by one hand. Both the hands are together required to produce the desired result. Similarly, achievements as well as general welfare of its people together are the surest indicator of a great nation. Therefore, because of the above reasons, both, the achievements and the general welfare of the people are an equally important indicator of a great nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05033557047 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87373937597 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442953020134 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5793802851 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308971162517 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119035475778 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107952596605 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200182329753 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862971861557 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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