Claim: An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Reason: When assessing the morality of an action, the results of the action are more important than the intent of the person or people performing the action.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
Whenever we do any action, we are always cared about the results disregarding its impact on the nation or environment.Though, our intentions for doing a certain action may be correct, However the way taken by us towards an action is equally important while considering its results. The author claims that an action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action, however, in my opinion, i strongly disagree with the author's claim because of the following two reasons.
Is it correct to take a wrong path for the success of our family? obviously not. For Example, consider a parent who wants to send his erudite child abroad for further studies and a great future ahead. But, they do not have the necessaary money to send his child for further studies. They even try to take a loan from bank, However, the loan is rejected because of their financial conditions. Therefore in order to gather the required money, they thought of taking a wrong action by doing a robery. So, with no more options left, unfortunaltely they had to take a bad action, though their intentions were good. If his child comes to know that his parents have done a crime for him, he will get stunned. Though, their intentions were good enough but a crime is a crime even if the amount of good is greater.
For instance, consider the war for independence between the Britishers and Indians. They were fighiting for a good cause and therefor it would have a positive result. Though, they recieve independence from britishers but at the cost of the lives of many great leaders and soldiers. Therefore, an action should be concerned about both the amount of bad as well as good results.
In conclusion, because of the above reasons, i disagree with the author's claims and reasons. There is always a right path which the person need to find before taking any wrong action. Moving on the right path will automatically have a positive result and make a person more successful in life. Positive intentions always leads to a good result.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...its impact on the nation or environment.Though, our intentions for doing a certain act...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...ong path for the success of our family? obviously not. For Example, consider a parent who...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... because of their financial conditions. Therefore in order to gather the required money, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e required money, they thought of taking a wrong action by doing a robery. So, wi...
^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... concerned about both the amount of bad as well as good results. In conclusion, because...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nclusion, because of the above reasons, i disagree with the authors claims and re...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75824175824 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61935818748 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502747252747 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3362786373 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385855177478 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102955466547 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145223557636 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25278558301 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187790679615 0.0667264976115 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...its impact on the nation or environment.Though, our intentions for doing a certain act...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...ong path for the success of our family? obviously not. For Example, consider a parent who...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... because of their financial conditions. Therefore in order to gather the required money, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e required money, they thought of taking a wrong action by doing a robery. So, wi...
^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... concerned about both the amount of bad as well as good results. In conclusion, because...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nclusion, because of the above reasons, i disagree with the authors claims and re...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75824175824 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61935818748 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502747252747 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3362786373 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385855177478 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102955466547 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145223557636 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25278558301 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187790679615 0.0667264976115 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.