If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is mandatory for anyone to set a goal or aim in life by remembering which he or she can stay in the proper way in his/her life. To achieve that goal, there are many ways that can be followed by anyone. But it is unwise to take the wrong way or shortcut in achieving that goal.
From childhood to adulthood, one has to be mature remembering what he has to do in future, what his responsibilities are towards his nation, his family and for himself also. By remembering them he can be motivated throughout his life that he has a definite goal that has to be achieved by any cost. Without any goal in one's life become monotonous. There is no happiness doing any task. For instance, if a student aims to do good in upcoming exam, he has to be very punctual in his own life. He has to work very hard. There must a knowledge inside him that, if he doesn't study well, he may fail in that exam. The exam which result is very much going to predict his later life. Again, he can make some strategies to do well in exam. Because, There are many ways that can be followed to do well in any task. So, if the student tries to do something illegal in his exam, then maybe by doing that illegal activities he may pass the exam for then but in his later life he will struggle must. Anything good is not planned to achieve easily in life. Everyone should realize this.
In living life, any human being sets goal in his day to day everyday task. By achieving that goal or by completing any task, he is sure to feel the happiness by doing of fulfilling that task. That kind of happiness cannot be compared to any kind of weal and woe in this earth. If anyone knows this very well, then he is sure to prosper in his later life. Many individual around us are seen to be in peak in his life. But how many of them are reached there by working honestly? Answer is "not many". So if there way of achieving that position is justifiable? "Completely not". They may found the support of other people around them for that moment, but they should know that very well that their intensity of popularity is temporary. In the long run, it will not be there. If till then, they don't realize this fact, then they will struggle in the later part of their life which is must.
For many people who are in hindrance of proper facilities, most of them try to achieve their aim by any hooks or crooks. Seeing other people around them who are successful, they feel demotivated always. For that reason, they want to bring success in their life without thinking that, the way that they are following are in good way or not. They engage themselves in that type of work that will bring bring them success very readily. They become blind in their way of success at once. The earlier they may realize this fact, the better their life will be. With limited resource, limited facilities, if any one tries his best in honest way, they are sure to see the light of success in their later life.
In conclusion, it can be stated that goal is necessary in every task of life to keep motivated in his own life. But the path that anyone is following should be monitored also. Every path to success is not praiseworthy, he should realize this first. By memorizing this simple formula, if he does his work honestly whatever the facilities he is getting, he is sure to be succeeded in his life which will bring endless happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...be mature remembering what he has to do in future, what his responsibilities are towards ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... his nation, his family and for himself also. By remembering them he can be motivate...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hieved by any cost. Without any goal in ones life become monotonous. There is no hap...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...e. He has to work very hard. There must a knowledge inside him that, if he doesnt study wel...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...must a knowledge inside him that, if he doesnt study well, he may fail in that exam. T...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ake some strategies to do well in exam. Because, There are many ways that can be follow...
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Line 5, column 814, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t will not be there. If till then, they dont realize this fact, then they will strug...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...o are successful, they feel demotivated always. For that reason, they want to bring su...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: bring
...emselves in that type of work that will bring bring them success very readily. They become ...
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Line 7, column 603, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...imited resource, limited facilities, if any one tries his best in honest way, they are ...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...anyone is following should be monitored also. Every path to success is not praisewor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 97.0 33.0505617978 293% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2776.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 631.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39936608558 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01195704033 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3854752225 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385103011094 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3577792096 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0526315789 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6052631579 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800174498156 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251011893635 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02523457481 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568156506374 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245816726355 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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