If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement that if an idea is worthy enough, any means neccessary in order to achieve this goal is justifiable is controversial. There are causes so dire that obstacles and hindrances must be overcome in order to attain the intended outcome. Conversely, some goals may be necessary, but often intrude onto the liberties of others in the process. Ultimately, the idea that achieving a goal by any means necessary is simply too broad in scope and inflicting to others.
Worthy is subjective. Earth is characterized by it's vastness and uniqueness. We all have separate opinions and disagree on a multitude of ideals. What may be deemed a worthy cause by one person, may not be seen equally by another. For instance, many children find it necessary to buy a brand new video game; parents worldwide see differently (their bank accounts agree). Certainly, there are cases where achieving something is worth ignoring constituents, but to live by the aphorism of "any means necessary" is simply too radical.
Furthermore, accepting a goal as necessary and doing whatever it may take to achieve this goal is narrow minded. Some of the most motivated people in the world are fueled by religion. For example, take radicalism. The destruction of the twin towers on September 11, 2001 was emboldened by religious fanaticism and jingoism. Suicide bombers and their constituents take lives because they strongly believe in their vision and will do anything necessary to achieve it. The statement is parochial in nature and ignores the needs of others.
However, one could sympathize with those who are motivated towards particular causes and refrain from stopping until their goal is achieved. Elon Musk has dedicated himself to pacifying our rapid descent into global warming. He has burnt through billions of dollars in his attempt to dethrone fossil fuels as our main source for energy and establish Tesla in the automobile industry. His blind passion is empowering and inspires people, but it has taken it's toll. Elon Musk has had three previous marriages and attests to his work getting the way of his personal development. Nonetheless, the statement creates an arguable position.
There are visions so powerful that it is understandable to ignore the needs and wants of others in order to achieve such an aspiration. Contrarily, the statement is too broad scoping. Compromise is necessary - without it, the world would be anarchy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'some'.
... to achieve this goal is narrow minded. Some of the most motivated people in the world are ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18734177215 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8928274963 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4306276897 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.96 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101906793552 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276023044326 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029080618176 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541598776167 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285156798942 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.